Bubbles of Painful Life

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    Bubbles of Painful Life

    Nothing to see again more
    Nothing to say again more
    Paining heart which I have
    Because of you, getting tore

    Lot of love made me mad
    Happiness changed into sad
    A moment of second which is
    Scribbled long making me pad

    Like a paddy field cultivated long
    No raining of love later, all wrong
    Life became a parody still I sing
    Breakage causing life ding dong 

    Promises I found gaping & misses
    Fruits of love, no nutritional dishes
    Countless pieces my heart paining
    No value any more hovering kisses

    Precious day-night nothing to me
    My wishes for forever for her to be 
    Rusty and nasty thinking it was
    Crumbling sky got fallen over me.
     






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    rougepriest commented on Bubbles of Painful Life

    10-04-2009

    each line is a bubble of a thought, and i hear a pop sound after each line ,interesting way to make a poem. its humorous in places and sadly bereft of intrigue, a tentative break in meter. neat idea.

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