Cast Away

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This poem was written to everyone who has felt the weight of the world was on their shouldar. The outside world tends to label you when they cant see the inside but the out. Don;t let people stop you from being who you are . Judge not that you may be judged, but live everyday according to the will of God. Soemtimes a fall is not so bad, as ling as you can admit your mistakes and find the strength to go on.

Cast Away

She turned around to see that no one was standing around
Everyone had left her side, there was not a soul to be found.
Her ways were not that agreeable and peace was not profound
But there was something special about this girl, something pure, something sound.
Of course life had passed some hands that couldn't be played at all
At times she often ran, when freedom sometimes would fall.
The world saw her as nasty, a disgrace to human kind
But in her heart there was a survivor, a place of refuge she had to find.
When she spoke her words were blunt, though sadness filled her eyes,
Everyone had cast her aside, though in her heart her beauty lied.
A broken vessel of hurt and deciet walked this lonely path
Cursed and haunted, torn and weak from the stress of human wrath.
She bent her knees and fell to the ground as surrenderence to life's fall
Her tears were of blood and flowed like a river, this woman had given her all.
When all was said and the tears were dried she looked to the hills for help
She asked for grace and mercy too, after all Jesus wept.
Though mysterious in looks and soul desire she picked herself up,
Something inside was different now, a change by the Master's touch.

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Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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