close my eyes

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    close my eyes
    when your not here
    i feel so alone
    but all i have to do is close my eyes
    and i see your face

    and at night
    when your not here
    to hold me tight
    i feel like crying
    but i remember
    just close my eyes
    and he'll be there

    but in the morning
    when i wake up
    i close my eyes
    cuz your not by my side
    i feel like you were just a dream

    but whn i talk to you
    my heart beats faster
    i know everything is better
    we're really together

    i pray nothing goes wrong
    cuz i don't want these feeling
    i have for you to ever go away
    i love you more than anything

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    gmsmiley1 commented on close my eyes

    05-18-2009

    Very raw and good.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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