COCONUT RIPPED FALLEN DOWN ON EARTH...

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    Coconut is very much having three eyes - assumed as that of lord Shiva

    COCONUT RIPPED FALLEN DOWN ON EARTH...

    COCONUT RIPPED FALLEN DOWN ON EARTH…

     

    Early in the morning before the sunrise

    Walked out of my home going towards

    Station that is nearer in a short fall of distance

    One can see playing of two wheelers or tri wheelers

    Rushing as I was aiming saw some of the four wheelers

    Were parked at road side as the drivers are taking rest

     

    In a sort while reaching the place of sports stadium

    On my right hand side falling of well grown coconut

    Making a little voice reaching the ground made me alert

    Though there is no persons close by, as I picked up

    The coconut with all my surprise as directed by mind

    And understood it has attained full time growth and leaving

    The tree reaching down, as I have left to find some peace

    Of mind

     

    Reaching the station having this fruitful fallen coconut

    As it is a big thing to give us something which I have’ not

    Thought even, simply I shacked, can hear a rattling voice

    Of water inner side of it, at the station seeing me with this

    Coconut, peeping through his window other side asked by his

    Eyes shown language, my hand has extended a booked ticket

    For my journey by express train 8 o’clock departure

    As on its way to a station at a far off distance of 8 hours

    Time to reach my festival village naming Keela Eral

    Ticket is checked up by the maser, said waiting list 14

    It is visualized me that list is reduced from 123 and now

    Still shows a lot of improvement to double digit to better

    Position to have my journey

     

    Having understood, I crossed the road to a coffee shop

    And had a cup keeping the fruitful coconut at the side

    Of the table as the waiter was looking at this in queer

    I wanted to carry this coconut in a carry bag that was

    Secured from him and the on lookers are seeing in queer

    Eyes, I have reached my home and it was a little time

    By 6 o’ clock in the morning

     

    I saw the wall clock stopped 9 o’clock night itself

    And saw a status of my wife still lying on sofa, could not

    Pay any attention; I slept a while till 7 o’clock at the middle

    On a wooden bench, I had searched my travel bag brown

    In colour and found lying outside the door way, now

    My mind is fully prepared to proceed with my journey;

    But she is not cared of anything and my voice that gave me

    Pain in mind

     

    I have brushed my teeth and washing body, changed my dress

    And all started towards the station, now the fully ripped

    Coconut was looking at me, what is this? You have picked up

    Kept me in bag just at the window by side of stair case

    What is the purpose?  Why this coconut has reached my house?

    What is the lesson I have to learn in mind? Because is it a good

    Sign of this to be kept? Because we Hindus used to honor the

    Coconut as a product of lord shiva that will take care

    By his nature makes the ending of life, it is an alarming status

    As my mind stayed at a moment and said, keep away and leave

    My deeds towards my nativity festival that is called Parivettai

    Which will be performed once in a year?

     

    What should I do now? I am placed in a dilemma, because my

    Wife is not giving any voice and not cared of my proceeding

    Towards the village for festival

     

    -Ayyan dj - 03032011   

     

     

     

     

     

     

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    ayyan commented on COCONUT RIPPED FALLEN DOWN ON EARTH...

    03-06-2011

    coconut will be a symbol of our lord shiva and it is good to format way to our life

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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