THE DAWN

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DAWN , the beginning of the day early in the morning is a good time

THE DAWN

DAWN

 

It is known to me that I have seen the dawn just

Before the rising of sun, the dawn has taken

A walk just before the rising of the sun at

The far off end at the eastern side

 

Rays of the sun is very mild and the formation

Of the sun is appearing in full round of golden

The dawn is very pleasant and everyone will love it

In the big river Ganges water flow is fine at dawn

 

The birds living in the branches of tree leaving

Its nest with their melodious voice, one can see

The dawn and invite the time to start the work

Of the day to bring success

 

One can hear the rimming tone by the river

One can see the fishes jumped out of water

In a gay mood, one can see the dawn in the

Early morning before the sun rise

 

One can hear the cock’s voice – Kokkarakoo

Before the sunrise to mark the beginning

Of the dawn as trumpet major very lovely

To bear the sense of time

 

Darkness is leaving a little by little

The stars in blue sky is likely to go away

As the comes dawn comes in one can see

And good feel in mind

 

Hindu lady of the house gets up in the morning

Cleaning frontage by water spray, making kolams

By dots and curves with rice powder and

Inviting the dawn to house beautiful

 

Bells is ringing from the matha temple

The sound of bell is bringing the dawn to us

For beginning day a pleasant one

A happy occasion

 

Ayyan dj 14022011

 

 

 

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