JUST WONDER...

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sOMEONE FIND THIS AS WONDER, BUT NOT FOR YOU AND I

JUST WONDER...

Just wonder!

 

One can see a seed inside of the Rice

Just wonder

 

One can smell fragrant from a flower

Just wonder

 

One can see inset inside of a stone

Just wonder

 

One can feel love inside of a person

Just wonder

 

Love has taken a wing and spread big

Just wonder

 

Love is always love that will never go

Just wonder

 

Mind is sinless that is frozen inside

Darkness which will never die

Just wonder

 

-A Y _ AN D J 24022011-

 

 

 

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sanctus commented on JUST WONDER...

02-24-2011

Dull as dishwater. Repeating "Just wonder" gets tiresome the 2nd time around

ayyan

02/24/2011

Oh! is it so- one can understand, dear. Thanks for your view- I shall take care

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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EDUCATION 1
A chain of life father to son 2
DOVE 1
Lost one thing 2
Oh God ! pearls 1
Little little 1
TREE 1
OH, GOD - 9 FIRE 1
ocean 2 1
OH, GOD -6 1
OH..! GOD!! 1
OH! GOD!! (2) 1
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SMALL MATTER BUT BIG ONE (7) 0
SMALL MATTER BUT BIG ONE (6) 0
SMALL MATTER BUT BIG ONE (5) 1
WIFE in my life 1
SMALL MATTER BUT BIG ONE (4) 0
SMALL MATTER BUT BIG ONE (3) 1
SMALL MATTER BUT BIG ONE (2) 1
MUMMY AND DADDY EQUAL TO GOD 1
SMALL MATTER BUT BIG ONE (1) 1
SHE SAID LIKE THIS, SHE, MY LOVE 0
ROSY SHE IS IN LOVE 1
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ROSY SHE IS IN LOVE 0
HAPPY NEW YEAR AND DAYS TO COME 0
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LOVE BLOOMS...... 1
LOVE BLOOMS...... 1
GIVE AND HAPPY 1
OH , MY SON 1
she is madam louis 1
ROSE 0
where is LOVE? 0
MOON 0
ever green 1
where is LOVE? 0
writings of god 0
STARS ARE VERY FAR AWAY 0
MOON 0
BIRTH AND DEADTH 2
OLDAGE AND OLD IS GOOD 0
SON AND FATHER 2
MANGO A FRUIT 1
touch of love 0
WILL HEAL MY SOUL TOTAL 0
RAIN DROPOS AND PLOUGHMAN 1
rose 1
SKY IS SO HIGH 1
He and She 1
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LOVE IS LOVE 2
STARS - SKY -BLUE CARPET 0
STARS - SKY -BLUE CARPET 0
SUN AND MOON 1
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BLACK BORAD 1
One lime Tree in my home front 1
young man and in his mind 0
LOVELY SLEEP 2
without you 1
in search of love 3
BODY AND SOUL 1
BUTTER FLY 0
THE SUN 1
The person is not either He or She - something varied 0
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MY MOTHER SAID 0
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MY MOTHER AND MY FATHER 2
Death 3
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He and She 0
rainbow color 0
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FEAR AND DARKNESS 0
ohm nama shivaya 0
EARLY BIRD BLACK 0
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CRY OF A BIG TREE 0
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He and Myself 0
do you love sky 0
AIR IN BUBBLE 0
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The Mother 0
vision and mind 1
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NOBLE NOTE 0
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Palm Tree 0
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she and he 1
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she and he 0
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Lover’s Pain 1
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suicide 2
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SHE AND HE 0
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DO YOU KNOW...! 0
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moon 2
Thou can sit on top 1
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DRINK - NO DRINK 0
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SPIDER 0
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Mummy Daddy 2
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LIFE AND DEATH 0
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DEATH 1
G O D AND ME 1
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DO YOU KNOW...! 0
MOTHER, WIFE, RIVER...! 0
Who is she...! Who is he...! 1
rain 0
DO YOU KNOW...! 0
ONE SHOULD KNOW 0
LIFE IS PRECIOUS 0
DOVE A LOVELY BIRD 1
YOU AND I are in THE SAME BOAT 1
HE IS LEAVING YOU AND I - SATHYA SAI BABA 2
DARKNESS 1
WHAT IS NEW TODAY? 1
monkey.. 0
EARLY IN THE MORNING... 1
MOTHER AND I 0
I AM VERY SMALL, SEVEN DAYS OLD 0
YOU AND I 0
108 is a fine one 2
THIS WILL BRING GOODNESS 1
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LOVE 0
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O C E A N 2
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SEA - Nature - God 1
ALL ARE UPTO WHERE? 0
OLD AGE COUPLE 2
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POEM ON LOVERES' DAY 0
ON LOVERS DAY 0
MY SOUL 1
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BODY AND SOUL 0
MY BODY AND SOUL 0
ELEPHANT 0
FALLING DOWN RINSING UP 0
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G O D AND ME 0
CHARACTER IS SUPREME 0
what they are all? 1
BIRTH DAY WISHES 0
WHERE ARE THEY? 1
HE IS PASSED AWAY TO OTHER UNKNOWN PLACE 1
ALL ARE FOR YOU 1
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life and death 2
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SEEDS 2
walking stick 0
HE AND SHE ARE REAL LOVERS 1
HE AND SHE 2
THE SUM IS NOT KNOWN 1
light and shadow 1
he and she - fine lovers 0
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HE AND SHE 4
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OLD AGE 2
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new year 2011 2
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YOU AND I IN A FOREST 1
I LOVE HER, I DO NOT KNOW 2
YOU AND I HAVE LEARNT MANY... 1
YOUNG MAN WHY SHOULD WORRY..? 2
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Hey... I like you, want you 3
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WILL HEAL MY SOUL TOTAL 2
LOVE - LOVE 1
SHOULDER SHOULD BE STRONG 2
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THAT IS TRUE 0
WHAT IS REMAINING....
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IT IS JUST A GIFT 2
Love and Sex 13
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RAIN! RAIN!! COME! COME !! 3
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DIWALI 0
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CATERPILLAR 1
NOBLE NOTE - ll 0
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MONKEY 0
LOVE LOST 0
VINAYAGAR CHATHURTHI 0
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AIR 0
LOTUS PINK AS ROSE 1
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BLUE 2
WHY HE DID LIKE THIS 1
NOBLE NOTE... 1
THE TIME AND GOD - LOVE.... 1
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Lotus 3
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THE LIFE IS SO MUCH, BUT VERY SIMPLE TO GO AWAY 1
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SHOW ME A WAY... 0
WHAT IS REMAINING....
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1
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Just after the Rain... 2
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HONEY BEE 2
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ROSE IS A ROSE 5
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Scratching 1
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SEA - Nature - God 3
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Honey Dear My Sweetly 0
Searching the God 2
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Happy Birth Day 2
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Goddess Saraswathi Devi - Divine 3
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LITTLE BIRD SHARE WITH ME 2
BIRTH AND DEADTH 2
BLACK BOARD 1
SAILING 1
The Endless End 0
A LITTLE MORE ... 0
NILE THE RIVER 0
A SONG BY A LOVER 0
Mummy Daddy 0
Up over the Blue 0
NOTHING 0
OH... MY LOVE...! 2
THE SUN SHINES - greet the couple 0
BECAUSE OF YOU 2
DROPS 1
THE SAILOR 1
Oh! Lord 0
Oh Dear... 0
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Lover's Pain 2
There is no... 0
PINKISH 0
My heart needs a doctor 0
oH GOD 0
OUT SIDER 0
Small Notes 0
BABY DANCE WITH ME 0
YOU AND I 0
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God 1
Noble note 0
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Sailing 2
Vision and mind 2