Cody's Lament

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    Cody's Lament

    I will tell you a secret you may not know.
    Give me your ear, and I'll give you a show.
    Let me tell you about my sorrowful life.
    That countlessly stabbed me with a knife.
    I knew a girl that world my world.
    A dove from above who showed me love.
    But the rain made a strain that caused me pain.
    All that's left is a crest that is have in a chest.
    Everything is wrong, my love is gone, never another dawn.
    Only the pureness of black made itself present.
    If the sun is down, I must go, this is my lament.

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    Margot commented on Cody's Lament

    08-12-2009

    very good writing i can relate to the one that got away my ex drown 4 yrs ago and he was the love of my life.im still trying to get over this check out my poems and ull see i can definitely feel ur pain

    BrielleC commented on Cody's Lament

    02-25-2009

    You have a good start here but i think it would a stronger effect if it didnt rhyme.

    chadallac74 commented on Cody's Lament

    02-25-2009

    Cool... nice flow and nice messege. Who do you think gave you the 10!!!

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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