Cold Heart

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    I'm not good in making poems. I made this for our Humanities subject. I don't know if it'll pass. .

    Cold Heart

     

    All I want is to have your dormant heart,

    And heal what thwarts the feeling of loving.

    For you have seized the beauty of man’s art,

    The pleasure of a blissful feeling.

     

    I could not wish, wish of anything else,

    But to unshroud you from solitary.

    You are apt to love, I believe so yes,

    For your eyes’ deep that conceals so many.

     

    You confounds us all, like a sullen tree,

    But like some trees, some birds reside to sing.

    Though vague’s the paint of your physiognomy,

    Deep within me, I am still believing.

     

    Tomorrow you’ll open your heart’s desire,

    And I won’t stop hoping what I’ve aspire.

     

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    iacai commented on Cold Heart

    12-06-2010

    thank you for liking it. =D

    erroneousflint commented on Cold Heart

    09-10-2010

    I believe that one's longing "can" penetrate the most isolated of souls...Many songs have been written about it,,, You delivered me... Thanks...A ten from this guy

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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