Combat Zone

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    Combat Zone


    I think of you all wrapped up and snuggled in our bed
    and me, I lie here shaking, bullets flying over head.

    There the snow is falling, to form a blanket cold and white.
    Here the ashes settle on a dark December night.

    Over there, I hear the laughter of our children on the phone.
    What I wouldn't give to be there and not here in this combat zone.

    The tree is wrapped in tinsel, in the photos that you sent.
    I'm so tired of eating MRE'S and living in a tent
    .
    It would be so nice to take a shower and be back in your arms. But "a soldier's got a job to do",
    to protect the world from harm
    .
    But keep me in your prayers tonight, for soon I'm coming home.
    This is goodbye from your loved ones, here in the combat zone.

    P.S. They sent my best friend home today,
    please send a card to his wife and tell her I'm sorry!
    I miss you.


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    tierra7 commented on Combat Zone

    11-19-2009

    ~sigh~ DEEP ! very Powerful words that tug where it counts...and must be felt ...we complain about so much in life, yet our men/women have no time to complain..they are more worried 'bout keepin' us safe.. .(whisperin') welcome home...& thank you 'gain for servin' and protectin' those of us whom you never meet....this deserves a 10 +...Love & Blessings...T-7

    mufasa commented on Combat Zone

    07-22-2009

    This poem makes me feel afraid..... for my son,but this is real life,and I cannot even begin to fathom...... how the war changes one.

    LadyLourdes commented on Combat Zone

    06-17-2009

    wow!!! very nice...and sad...but real.............

    Dragon commented on Combat Zone

    06-06-2009

    it sent shivers down my spine... i could really visulize what you were saying. very strong. i loved it

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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