Come let’s make our love anew

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    Feeling sad about a love that has slipped away

    Come let’s make our love anew

    Our love looked sweet

    My friends praised it

    I have longed to see our love grow

    Like a mild storm that steadily grows

    To become a hurricane

    Strong and unstoppable

    But it rather lost its flavour

    With nothing to savour

    Becoming tasteless …

    I saw an old tattered car

    On the side of a road

    Located in a little valley

    In the midst of a little community

    With weeds grown all over and within

    Its front doors torn

    And its tires ruptured.

    People pass by

    Some sell close by

    Yet no one cares about it

    I said to myself,

    That so, has our love become

    Rejected and left to grow old and cold

    Just like a lonely rose

    Left to grow in the midst of thorns and thistles

    Not noticed and losing its value.

    Oh! My love

    Come, please come...

    Come let's make our love anew

    What we used to have is special

    And different from what others have

    Your smile always gave me an inspiration

    That no other lady can give.

    Oh! My love

    Come, please come...

    Come let's make our love anew

    And show the whole world

    That our love is meant to last forever

     

    Copyright © Christopher Awortwe

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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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