Contained Space

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    Contained Space

    Two people in love
    A dame and her swain--Ed
    Between them
    Space is contain--ed

    A vial,a bottle,
    A jar,or a jug
    You guessed it mug
    In these space is contained

    An atom,a molecule
    A system or wood engrained
    The head of a sweet little fool
    Space is contained

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    Sopradiction commented on Contained Space

    05-10-2009

    Short, sweet, scientific... good write my friend

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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