Creation

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  • Passion

    Poem Commentary

    I wrote this poem as a first attempt at lyrical poetry. My voice is usually free form in nature but I was inspired by "one night stand " by poetrygal45 to try my hand at lyrical poetry. Here goes

    Creation

    I taste your mouth and the wine,

    I gaze upon a body so very fine.

    Clothes disappear upon the floor,

    As I reach to lock the outer door.

     

    Your sweat and my sweat permeate the room,

    You drop to your knees and seal my doom.

    Flung on the bed,

    With legs wide spread.

     

    I dive onto the bed and in between,

    Arising covered in a sticky sweet sheen.

    Climbing on top our bodies cling,

    Glistening with sweat trapped in between.

     

    Our musk’s merge as one,

    A new scent has become.

    Uniquely yours and uniquely mine,

    Creation is so very divine.

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    castlemist commented on Creation

    07-23-2009

    This is hot man...I like it...I think it would make a good song.

    AlexaLove954 commented on Creation

    07-20-2009

    Great flow..it lets your mind intertwine with the description as if the reader was the person you were talking about...*touche'

    miwall513

    07/21/2009

    thanks alexa I think more erotic poems should be written. Who hasn't been there glad you enjoyed

    FLAWLES commented on Creation

    07-18-2009

    Yo homie this is good. I too know what's it's like to read a poem and be inspired to write something with it in mind. You just can't make to too good. Look at her, I call her pg, "give me more". They always want more.

    miwall513

    07/19/2009

    thanks and always always leave them wanting more

    poetrygal45 commented on Creation

    07-18-2009

    Sexy mmmmmmmmm the smell of sex. I like it . Give me more.....

    miwall513

    07/18/2009

    ty more to cum i think I found my genre

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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