Perfection

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    Poem Commentary

    This is a real life experience and thank God I had the extreme pleasure of looking at and touching the most beautiful creation body-wise I have ever seen. Her skin was flawless at 36 and there was no sag. Flat stomach,  breast and tush defined gravity legs stong and muscular. I couldn't wait to share her with my poetry family.  I hope you enjoy her.

    Perfection

    Have you ever seen perfection?

    Have you ever seen its face?

    I have last night in revelation,

    A perfect naked body without scar or trace.

     

     

    I stared in astonishment,

    Searching desperately for blemish or mar,

    And to my utter amazement,

    Believe me, I looked near and far.

     

     

    From head to toe,

    Not even one.

    She was strong and muscular,

    She was definitely built for fun.

     

     

    I asked her how she did it,

    How she defied gravity at thirty-six.

    She said “I stay toned and fit”

    What a night and interesting mix.

     

     

    Her beautiful body glistened,

    With the oil I deeply rubbed,

    Her soft moans I did listen,

    This job I truly loved.

     

     

    Perfection was her birthright,

    She was born to carry it.

    Every pore of her was tight,

    Stunned, shocked my lip I bit.

     

     

    Have you ever seen perfection?

    Have you ever seen its face?

    I have last night in revelation,

    A perfect naked body without scar or trace.

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    wwjd72 commented on Perfection

    08-19-2009

    FINALLY A MIND THAT SAYS IT AND LEAVES SOMETHING TO IMAGINE ! TENDERLY GUIDED SO TO MARINATE! BRAVO!!!!!

    JDSitton commented on Perfection

    07-27-2009

    This one is interesting... What I want to know is if you shared this with your 36 year old beauty... she should hear your praise!

    miwall513

    07/28/2009

    absolutely.

    AlexaLove954 commented on Perfection

    07-27-2009

    touche'....I hope when I am 36 I will be able to say that someone has met perfection...

    miwall513

    07/27/2009

    God i am getting excited just thinking about her

    786mona commented on Perfection

    07-26-2009

    hahahP) cool poem:) :)

    miwall513

    07/27/2009

    thanks 786 have you done anything new lately when you do let me know

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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