Crying in the rain

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i wrote this song when it was raining. and i was thinking about it so i wrote this song. i know its not the best but i am still learning. :D-/-< PLEASE ENJOY MY PHOTOGRAPHED PIC BY ME

Crying in the rain

Crying in the rain

let me say this only once in my life i was standing alone when you came into my life i found my self in paradise with you and me alone and when you left me alone I went at the same place hopping you will come back to the place we met so now i am all wet by the rain that went down crushing my dreams.
I started crying in the rain so no one can see me crying while i am crying in the rain so i need to see you again only once in my life i hope to find you or i will keep crying in the rain i went to every single place we went hopping to find you there but i didn't find you so i keep crying in the rain yeh yeh cops came to ask if i wanted some help but i told them i didn't need help so i keep trying to find you in the rain so the cops came to ask me again so i told them yes i do then they told me what do you need help with so i told them were you are so they told me your location and gave me a ride to you and when i finally found you i told you i love you and you said i love you to then i told you why did you leave then you said cause of your band so i keep crying in the rain yeh crying in the rain ohohohohohhhhhhh.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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