The Old Days

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I know its short but that was my first poetry to write so i wanted to share it with you and nope i don't want to make any changes so that it stays the same as always love you Every-one [:D-/-<| .

The Old Days

Coming back from the old days.
To stay with you like the old ways.
I wish this love wont go away.
I cann't love like the old days.
But you stole my heart and ran away.
But i am still alive without your love.
Give me your hand to be strong.
Without your hands i'll be lost.
And without your eyes i cann't see.
I recognized that your nice and cute.
So i disided to bigin a new life with you.
If you too want it to be so.
So let it be so.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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