darkness

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    darkness


    Here in the darkness, I lose my self
    all thoughts of the day fly away
    my only comfort has left me,
    what will I find?
    Here in the darkness, ordinary people surround me.
    the silence is bliss for all of us.
    the outside world is chaos and only we have left.
    in my shroud of silence, the world flies by.
    no pain can heal me,
    no words can smooth the bumps that have grown over my mind
    here in the darkness

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    madkracker696 commented on darkness

    08-28-2009

    0.0 Wow...that is awesome! :D I could feel that all the way over here in Oregon...

    adurna

    09/21/2009

    dude, thanks alot, i'm kinda new at this

    Rhaven commented on darkness

    05-14-2009

    I like it

    Laurief2009 commented on darkness

    05-13-2009

    Spelling, grammer. Other than that looks pretty good.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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