Dearest Love

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    This is the first poem I've written in a couple years. I used to write all the time. SO needless to say I'm a little rusty. The flow seems a little off to me so if you see sometimes that can help it flow better please let me know :)

    Dearest Love

    I sit down in my chair, feet up, wrapped hair.
    I'm writing a letter to tell my love how much I care.

    I have tea in hand, cream with a little sugar,
    I start out "Dearest Love" on the paper.

    I write how I love that he's mine.
    I say how I love to spend time.

    I compare him to air,
    How I need it and its always there.

    I smile as I reflect,
    On the way we connect.

    How all the girls pray
    For a man that acts that way.

    And how lucky I must be
    'Cuz My Love chose me.


    I write pages of praise
    Of how he brightens my days.

    And words can't keep up
    with the feelings that erupt

    when I think of My Love
    and the things that he does.

    I continue on for pages
    about his unshaking patience.

    And characteristics I lack
    he possesses and gives back.

    I list examples and draw pictures
    of how together we're the perfect mixture.

    And lastly I remember to say
    how I hope he doesn't go away.

    Then I fold my paper and hide it away
    Until I find My Love someday.

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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