Deaths Breath

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    Deaths Breath

    So lonely sigh……. So lonely
    The death of the soul
    Continues
    Darkness settles over her eyes
    She’s shattered with no hope.
    Left alone to continue

    How?

    Weight of disappointment
    Questioning will I ever get this right?
    Darkness whispers more lies
    My soul is dying she screams
    Doesn’t anyone care?

    Darkness fills the room
    Her body becomes numb cold and desperate
    No body listens
    No body cares
    She feels the coldness of his breath on her.

    Why she cries out!
    Take me away her soul screams.
    The blade he uses on her darkness
    Scars deeply
    With every cut
    He seduces her mind
    The release

    The crimson rives flow
    He laughs
    The blue streams rush
    You’re lifeless on the floor
    Cold and Alone

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    StandingBear commented on Deaths Breath

    06-27-2009

    Great title, fluid verses, great write. "So lonely sigh.......So lonely The death of the soul continues." Great lines.

    Passionatebeyez

    06/27/2009

    Thanks so much!!!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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