Depended On & Hated On

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  • QuEeNbE
  • is Im BAK!!! now itz Be~Lovey aka Queen Be!! Holla atchya gurl

Depended On & Hated On

I am a strong young woman
Keepin ma head up while ma life is turnin
I am loved and wanted
By tha haterz Im taunted
Everyday my swag is flaunted
I am wanted
Looked up to by many
Hated on by plenty
Depended on by family
Cuz im so caring and friendly
They depend on me daily
Sometimes itz too much
But with ma love they're still touched
I always do wat i can
For tha fam and ma man
Im always givin a helpin hand
Even for ma enemies I do wat I can
Not always nice, but they're ma #1 fan
Cuz i keep ma friends close but ma enemies closer
Ridin wit me on ma life thatz like a rolla coasta
It goes up and down
But u wont see me wit a frown
Cuz i gotta keep ma smile round
Known as Queen Be in ma town
BEIN DEPENDED ON AND HATED ON STILL AINT HOLDIN ME DOWN


                                                                                                          ~Brittany~

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Chaos128 commented on Depended On & Hated On

10-05-2009

Way to state your case, QB. I like your hip-hop technique. A lot of people try it but don't get far with it. You make it work because you don't try to force it. Good Marks for good work!

QuEeNbE

10/23/2009

thank u sorry it took so long i jus got bak on cuz i didnt have ma password!!

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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