WHY

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    WHY
    Why This Gotta Happen To Me
    Why Werent We Meant To Be
    Why Cant I Find The One
    A Good And Loving One
    Why Cant I Have It Good
    Like I Could And Should
    I Need To Find The One For Me
    Thatll Treat Me Right And Do Good Things
    Make It Known That Im His Gurl
    And Wuldnt Hurt Me For Tha World
    One Thatll Treat Me Right
    And Have No Stupid, Pedy Fights
    Fullfill My Needs From Day To Night
    And Keep Our Relationship Tight
    Then I Just Might
    Have Tha Man Thats Right

                                        ~Brittany~

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    mamasan commented on WHY

    12-07-2009

    Ah, I can see you have talent and know how to put forth your thoughts and the style shows me it isn't only words but the design of the way you give substance to the words. I really enjoy the way you write and now I would love to see one written about joy and bliss....I will keep checking here because I gotta feeling your getting smarter and smarter about how to surf thru in life....sometimes you catch the waves and sometimes you don't but what is important that you don't give up on your surf board.
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    scrye commented on WHY

    07-19-2009

    Your poem is nice. Good message. There's one out there just be patient love comes when lest expected.
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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