DISPLACEMENT

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    DISPLACEMENT
    Gifted with thought my pen is blessed,
    Which keeps it drippin and drifting off Into different directions.
    Split dimension four ways,
    Before Grace, laid hate, made shame, became lifted.
    Then just as quick slipped to Displacement,
    Now stuck in the basement slave to creation 
    A place of soul arrangement....
    Progression destin location next flow Laced and fresh so...
    Attempts to contend they end erased and exempt slow
    Gifted with thought my pen is blessed,
    Which keeps it drippin and drifting off Into different directions.
    Split dimension four ways,
    Before Grace, laid hate, made shame, became lifted.
    Then just as quick slipped to Displacement,
    Now stuck in the basement a slave to creation 
    Place of soul arrangement....
    Progression destin location next flow Laced and fresh so...
    Attempts to contend they end erased and exempt slow

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    517Jacqueline commented on DISPLACEMENT

    04-25-2014

    I thought the rhyming is good, poor pen it got dislocated and became a slave to creation. Why don't you pick it up so it'll be your slave. I like the tone of it, good job, nice write.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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