Do As I Say

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I wrote this poem with not only my mother in mind, but using one of her most used sayings that she uses on us "Do as i say not as i do".  Being her oldest child we have been through everything from hard times to come ups and i felt a dedication and sort of translation of what she has told me and taught me was in order.  To make it also more personal i added the "of course you can go to the moon part" in a reminder of how our parents always say things like that even though they are nearly impossible, including the famous "Of course you can do this, and that, and become president, and save the world" and etc. When my mom read it i think she was surprised at how much i had been able to understand her. lol

Do As I Say

Do as I say, Not as i do
For I have been through more
than you have times two,
Do as I say, Not as I do
Though I have seen it all,
I dont want you to
Do as I say, Not as I do
Though your only five
"Of course you can go to the moon"
Do as I say, Not as I do
Though we're never apart
The real problems, you never knew
Do as I say, Not as I do
Your mind is now sugar coated
But soon they'll give you a clue

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Phoenix9 commented on Do As I Say

08-21-2009

very nice, my dad did the same to me, he was a policeman when i was young and taught me how to drive, not like he did, but I couldnt help it LOL.. any a great write

Frankee

09/02/2009

lol well then i guess u no how i feel, thank you though

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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