Little Sister

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This was a poem i wrote for my too little sisters, who are 3 and 11.  To make it a little more personal i added their family nicknames at the end; Tink and Boobydoop.  And with a young one like that, yes the "bites" part, is in need of mention, lol

Little Sister

Little Sister, Little Sister
Though its me you watch and immitate
Little Suster, Little Sister
It is you that truly slipped from heavens gate
Little Sister, Little Sister
Though its me that is higher, educational wise
Little Sister, Little Sister
It is you who stays amazing watcched by my eyes
Little Sister, Little Sister
Though you sometimes nag and annoy
Little Sister, Little Sister
It is you who keeps bringing me joy
Little Sister, Little Sister
Though at times i seem harsh and mean
Little Sister, Little Sister
I hope my love shows in between
So Little Sister, Little Sister
Through the fights, bites, and above
My Little Sister, Little Sister
Its for my 'Tinks' and 'Boobydoops'
I cant discontinue my love!

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Sydney commented on Little Sister

09-13-2009

lol this is truly spontaneous, funny, and at the same time sad and beautiful. keep on writing.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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