The Questions

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This poem is pretty self explanitory, it was a time when i wasnt really sure what i was going to do or how i really felt and who woulda known it came out this good. Its one of my favorite self written poems, partly because for once the ending turned out really good but enjoy!

The Questions

Why does he care?
Why does she love?
Whats watching them?
What hovers above?
God guides these two
down watery paths
not always supplying
life's inflated rafts.
But this matters not,
since he still will care
since she still will love
life's rocks they bear
In her smile
he finds the light
though she cowers
with embarrassed fright
In his height
she is secure
in arms that are
guaranteed to lure
These two care
that they're together.
These two love
through any weather.
Will these two be?
Its hard to say,
but for the future
these two will pray

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kochab commented on The Questions

09-08-2009

very good work, Im going to have to check out some more of your work tomorrow

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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