Down this darkened road

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Down this darkened road

This night is so cold
And I feel so alone
Struggling to find my way
Down this Darkened road

With no light in sight
No one nearby
I start to wonder
Is this karma working in my life

Was it something that I have said
Or something that I have done
To become a wonderer and a vagabond

I just want you to listen to me
This voice crying inside of me
Begging and pleading for someone to love
Just a simple touch and a hug

I am scared to walk this darkened road alone
Fearing that I will not find my way home
Will you help me and guide the way
And be the light to Brighten my day


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BlackButterfly1 commented on Down this darkened road

07-06-2010

"I start to wonder Is this karma working in my life Was there something I said Or something I done To wander this road All alone" I have been asking myself this same question lately!

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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