Dreamscan

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Dreamscan

What do you dream about, my precious?
Of fields of clovers and sunflowers in an early May morning,
or of little puppies hiding in a basket under the X-mas tree,
or of beautiful sunsets in the caribbean,
I need to know my precious, it's killing me inside.
What do you dream about, my precious?
Walking on the white sand beaches of Florida,
or of murdering someone with a hammer,
or maybe push someone off a bridge,
you watch the terror on thier face as their lungs fill with icy water
at first you see bubbles floating to the top of the water,
but a few moments later the bubbles stop.
What do you dream about, my precious?
Of cute little scenes, or a cold blooded murder?
I need to know, my precious, it's killing me inside.

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Karma885 commented on Dreamscan

03-06-2009

WOW NOT BAD...IT WAS LIL FLIP FLOPPY.I ALMOST GOT LOST READING IT. AND THEN I PICTURED WHERE YOU WHERE GETTING AT. NOT A BAD POEM. CAN U READ MY POEM AND COMMENT THANK U

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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