Dry life in this world

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  • Confusion

    Dry life in this world

    Eyes open
    Another day again
    Slave to the schedule of consistency
    Repetitive and dull

    No feeling of joy
    No excitement
    Only dry cold dirt falls through the fingers

    Looking for simple pleasures
    wind on the face
    stepping on the light from the hallway that reflects on the ground
    Extra acceleration on a country road
    Beautiful landscapes that God paints
    Always puts a smile on your face
    Never disappoints
    Never

    Night comes
    Your mind gathers itself from the schedule
    An opening for free thought
    A whisper of a distant thought
    Hard to recognize, unfamiliar
    Like the night sounds of war in a trench
    blurred and chaotic
    You remember endless happiness
    Only to remember there is time in this world
    And nothing is endless
    For that would be breaking the laws placed upon us all

    Do not fear
    For we have Prayer
    God always listens
    Be patient
    God will bring you to endless life but,
    not in this world
    The world were dreams and reality are one

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    Helios commented on Dry life in this world

    08-12-2009

    You represent the new style of poetry today with its beats and confusion. It's new, but very enjoyable [ I will have to save it]!

    Hammer300

    08/27/2009

    Thanks for the comment, always nice to hear.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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