Far Away?

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    Far Away?

     Fear strikes me
    My heart is pounding
    And adrenaline
    Courses through my blood

    Worried thoughts
    Fill my mind
    And swarm my confidence
    In your life

    I can't find you
    I can't reach you
    Are you dead
    Or still alive?

    Please tell me somewhere
    Your heart still beats
    There's still some way
    To save you

    I'm curled in a ball
    Cold and afraid
    I miss your warmth
    I miss your embrace

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    Sx9 commented on Far Away?

    01-17-2011

    at 15 your vibes is certainly run wild deep and to the other side of maturity,but with all inspiration never fails to reveal thoughts that make us wonder what the heck..
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    JazzyBaby

    01/17/2011

    I'd say I grew up quick for a fifteen year old. I learned really fast how to take care of myself and my little brother as well as my twin brother, who mostly kept to himself. But just over a year ago my twin died, and I hit the ground hard, got into an abusive relationship, got out of it, quickly and have had quite a rollercoaster of not trusting people since. So, I suppose I just spilled my life on a public forum to explain this to you, but I'm not 15, not really, and I don't think I ever will be again. Although this is one of my more favourite peices and I'm really glad you like it

    Sx9

    01/18/2011

    I understand,,and thanks to be honest and true,,

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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