final release

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    final release

    a condradicting emotion,
    and unknown state of being.
    Out of this world excitement,
    but a unbelievable sense of pain.

    Being around you brings a natural high,
    but living without you seems impossible to try.
    Overflowing thoughts of how's and why's.
    what brought us to this?
    is there any love that still exsists?

    Everything you say makes me hold on stronger,love you harder, and want you forever. I can't picture myself with any one but you. So wrapped up in someone that puts me last, i must look forward and let go of the past.
    so now is when i say my final goodbyes,
    time to relize im not what you want in this life.


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    Scribble commented on final release

    04-12-2010

    This is a very common situation. The J.Giles Band wrote, "You love her, she loves him, he loves sombody else, you just can't win. And so it goes until the day you die, this thing they call love, is gonna make you cry. I've been through diamonds, I've been through minks, been through it all, LOVE STINKS! lol

    ISWASALWAYS commented on final release

    10-27-2009

    Love is often blind, a heart who wouldn't listen. A love nonetheless spoken from yours. Thanks we all of been there.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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