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02-22-2011 at 09:22:52 AM

RE: To The Original Poetry Site

I am new here and I am not trying to ruffle any feathers, just trying to make this feud come to an end... here's my 2 cents.

To write the poetry that each and everyone of you have written takes a great deal of intelligence and frankly it is quite sad and disheartening to see both sides in this dispute acting so ignorantly.

Everyone needs to just calm down, take a step back, and realize each and everyone involved in this dispute is intelligent and has feelings and the hurtful exchanges should stop right away!

Being new, I hope I have not overstepped any boundaries but like I have already stated, this dispute is unsettling to me.

Look forward to reading and sharing poetry with you all!

02-24-2011 at 05:39:19 AM

This is For You, Andy

Quote:
Originally Posted by andy2103

I am new here and I am not trying to ruffle any feathers, just trying to make this feud come to an end... here's my 2 cents.

To write the poetry that each and everyone of you have written takes a great deal of intelligence and frankly it is quite sad and disheartening to see both sides in this dispute acting so ignorantly.

Everyone needs to just calm down, take a step back, and realize each and everyone involved in this dispute is intelligent and has feelings and the hurtful exchanges should stop right away!

Being new, I hope I have not overstepped any boundaries but like I have already stated, this dispute is unsettling to me.

Look forward to reading and sharing poetry with you all!


I'm just here for poetry and to help poets. As far as I know, Jezzabel has never helped any poets become more proficient in their craft. I am about to post a poem now, but jezzabel is clearly not here for the same reason, instead posting these stupid, outdated rock videos which have nothing to do with poetry, just to annoy and frustrate me (so she thinks). Now I ask you;, WHO is the one is obsessed? Not me, it is her; I tried reasoning with her, but you cannot reason with a "rascist bigot", especially if you're the "wrong kind", (as I obviously must be). I am not one of the "master race", so there's nothing I can do. Anyway. here is the "Master's Cat"
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The Master's Cat
(Based on a story by Curtis Cost)
For Ksusha the Cat

The music fades, the lights draw low,
The swelling din that must subside;
With joyous music finally stopped,
This is the day that the master died.

The studio lights fill every nook,
Except for the chair where the master sat;
The last light finally reveals the truth,
In that seat there now sits a cat!

Not just any cat, but the dearest friend,
Who the master told his secrets to;
This stoic, furry "special guest",
Poised and ready for his interview.

The announcer steps to the front in haste,
Impeccably groomed and nattily dressed;
Apparently combed with buttered toast,
He leers with contempt at his "special guest".

"No friends nor family of any kind,
So that his work might carry on;
No successor to this calling able,
To create such joy with his baton."

"This self centered fuzzball seated here,
Who alone had known the master's care;
This useless postule always with him,
At his side always-everywhere!"

"Nothing to give and nothing to lose,
Nothing to gain, what a terrible waste!
The master's secrets in this creature's keeping?
Gone forever, such a bitter taste!"

"He feels not the slightest tinge of sadness,
No grief shows on his whiskered face;
The master's gift in this cat's keeping?
Gone forever, what a huge disgrace!"

As "old cementhead" ends his show,
Not the slightest noise does the kitty make;
The lights were dimmed, the silence fell,
As the master's cat seems wide awake.

The banging of chairs, the clanging of props,
The master's theme would long subside;
When they arrived at the master's seat,
They found that the cat indeed, had died.

Drenched with grief and wet with tears,
This lifeless critter had finally spoken;
In life the creature could ill express,
That the dam had burst, his heart had broken!.

From the torture of inconsolable loss,
That the wretched human heart can't see;
To the still wet teardrops on the master's seat,
The master's cat was finally free!

Those fading lights, the far off strains,
The din that would at last subside;
But the small, sick heart concealed from view,
This day, the master's cat has died!

The dying creature could not describe,
The music he'd heard and places he'd been;
But his furry corpse will indeed attest,
To the fathomless grief so deep within.

That cannot be heard nor understood,
For the priceless love that dwells inside;
The bond between these kindred souls,
Lives on even after both have died!


Andy, catch me on www.youtube.com/user/studlydoright111

www.facebook.com/david.a.neves




Last edited by feldmarschal 02-24-2011 at 05:44:14 AM

02-24-2011 at 06:05:23 AM

RE: RE: To The Original Poetry Site

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Originally Posted by JadedJezzabel

during the day i sleep....because i work all night. and if you had one ounce of intelligence, you would have read and understood what message i was sending with that poem. but you chose to take the part of something you can exploit to serve your purpose or to add value to your twisted point of view and leave the rest. anything i have written to you has been in defense of myself, my friends or my poetry. you have engaged in slanderous activity. you have accused me of being a crack addicted hooker, a racist, a bigot and god knows what else. you have bashed my sexuality, my womanhood and my worth as a person and a poet. you have tried to shove down the throats of others what poetry is. what you don't get is that poetry and what it is is subjective to each person. it may be this to this person and that to that person. i use to to express what i have a hard time saying out loud....its real life for me.....i chose to write about my reality. nothing more or less. if you or some one else choses to write differently then that is thier right as a person to write however they wish to write. i don't have to like it and it doesn't have to be relevant to me to have merit. because i chose to write about real life my poetry is not always pretty as life is not all wine and roses. there are ugly things in the world....in my reality i just call it how i see it.....and your 15 min are over. i've given this and you all the energy i am going to give you. you are a sick twisted old man with some real mental issues and i hope you get the help you need before you really go off the deep end and cause someone real damage.


Oh yeah, we KNOW that you WORK AT NIGHTLOLshockshockshockshock
Your very own words testify against you-you've already admitted that you're a hooker and that you're a junkie, so, do I have to drag YOUR OWN WORDS out of the files and SHOW YOU just how pitiful and ridiculous you are? I also note the times that you post...ALL HOURS, MIDMORNING, ROOSTERS HOURS, DAYTIME (that's when you "bump", remember, pumpkin"? ) Clearly all of the drug use has taken a heavy toll on your short term memory, so you are not only unable to keep track of your own lies, but you have apparently lost the ability to sperate fact from fantasy! You need serious help, because you're thought processes and your lack of accountability for what you say rival those of some of the most heinous despots in history. Why are you here? Are you here for poetry? Why are you here? Are you here to try to manufacture an "insanity" case against me, when clearly it is YOU who are demonstrating the kind of obstrucionism and obsessive malice for which you accuse ME? This is your pattern; to do the dirty deeds, and then blame others for your dirt-all junkies do this, and all drug addicted floozies like you are expert at deception and falsification. WHY ARE YOU HERE? This is a rhetorical question which YOU HAVE ALREADY ANSWERED IN YOUR OWN WORDS! Why are you here? If you're NOT here to help poets, then go follow your family of backstabbing, degenerate, phony "family" to whatever site they are soiling up now, with their ridiculous, phony, immoral "community" (with Dah Fuhrer as their head rascist bigot-in-charge). You're here just to bother me, and I'm going to cintinue to report you until they slap the cuffs on ya'!

02-24-2011 at 06:24:58 AM

RE: RE: To The Original Poetry Site

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Originally Posted by JadedJezzabel

QUOTE WORDS OF DAVID NEVES

This Internet age has given rise to the critical sniper - and snipers have always been the most despised of soldiers. The Internet critic is foulmouthed and illiterate - he hides behind a cloak of anonymity, he offers no products of his own making. The insults he issues have a playground quality. He says to others what was once said to him, believing that they will feel the same hurt as he did - and still does. And somehow this will compensate him. The abused has been sold on the benefit of becoming the abuser.

DAVID I AM SO GLAD YOU HAVE FOUND YOUR WAY TO THE TRUTH OF WHO YOU ARE. TRUER WORDS HAVE NEVER BEEN SPOKEN AND I'M SURE IT TOOK MUCH SOUL SEARCHING TO COME TO THIS......BRAVO!!!!!!!!
Those are not my words, those are the words of Mr. Tom O'Bedlam, otherwise known as "Spoken Verse" on youtube (and what a great channel it is!)
Clearly Suzanna Smith doesn't know how to read simple English (I can speak seven languages, four fluently, but she can't even speak her own properly). Clearly, I do not fit this scenario since I am NOT anonymous, therefore, how could I be an "internet sniper"? However, another one of Suzanna's little games is to try to "steer" others by forcing them into accepting her obviously erroneous interpretations. Why is she here? Why is she trying to annoy me? (It's not going to work, little girl-because I am the mature adult, and you are the little wanna-be high school slut.) She is not a real poet, and she should follow her phony "pseudo poet "friends" into whatever demonic website these morons are now well on their way to destroying.
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Last edited by feldmarschal 02-24-2011 at 06:28:04 AM

02-26-2011 at 01:27:24 PM

RE: RE: To The Original Poetry Site

Quote:
Originally Posted by feldmarschal

It is important to boil all of this down to its basic premise: and that is that dahlusion cannot tolerate any criticism that he perceives as "demeaning", no matter how specific or constructive it may be, and that he tries to punish those who "dare" criticize him, like he is doing right now to 16 year old Helios, sending him the most hateful emails viciously attacking me. I have repeatedly offered to meet him on skype, but he has ignored my demands. This extreme reaction to negative criticism is NOT without precedent, as the following piece will show. I know this to be true in my own life, where dissapointing criticsm and rejection caused me to completely stop writing for almost a ten year period, so I know what it feels like. It must be addressed. It must be dealth with.



Criticism is of two kinds: praise and condemnation: approval or reproval. So many people have told me to ignore negative criticism. If only it were that easy. There are very few of us whose lives have not been deeply affected by negative criticism. Thomas Hardy stopped writing novels after Jude the Obscure was badly received by the critics. He had over 30 years' work left in him so the critics deprived the world of many great novels. John Keats was silenced by his critics and died believing himself a failure.

There may be a good reason for the profound effect of criticism. Mankind evolved in relatively small communities. The civilisation of the last 10,000 years has made hardly any difference to our DNA: the motivations which evolved before that still influence our daily lives, even though many of them are no longer relevant. Our deep response to negative criticism is, I suggest, a remnant of these primordial instincts. In primitive times being considered useless might be fatal. "I am a tainted wether of the flock, meetest for death: the weakest kind of fruit drops earliest to the ground." -The Merchant of Venice. Act iv. Sc. 1. Who would want to be chosen for sacrifice or considered to be worth more as a source of protein?

Before there was law, social justice was based on honour. In some lawless communities, such as the inner-city gangs it still is: in such societies it is distinctly unhealthy to be unpopular. Whole societies have been based on manners, etiquette and honour. Alexander Pushkin fought 29 duels and was eventually killed at the age of 39 defending his wife's honour - and, by all accounts, it wasn't worth defending. In such duelling societies the critic had to consider whether his target might be a better swordsman or a better marksman.

Manners or etiquette were codes of social conduct designed to prevent the hurt disapprobation gave to others. In modern society -- particularly in Britain -- this has become inverted: politeness is now considered offensive whereas familiarity and insults between mates are a sign of affection.

This Internet age has given rise to the critical sniper - and snipers have always been the most despised of soldiers. The Internet critic is foulmouthed and illiterate - he hides behind a cloak of anonymity, he offers no products of his own making. The insults he issues have a playground quality. He says to others what was once said to him, believing that they will feel the same hurt as he did - and still does. And somehow this will compensate him. The abused has been sold on the benefit of becoming the abuser.

The only criticism that is valuable to others reflects universal truth, it is not merely an expression of the inner conflict of the critic, and needs must be practised by those most qualified and most altruistic. Negative criticism is often nothing more than boasting in disguise and, like most boasting, is just an outward manifestation of inner feelings of inferiority.



This Internet age has given rise to the critical sniper - and snipers have always been the most despised of soldiers. The Internet critic is foulmouthed and illiterate - he hides behind a cloak of anonymity, he offers no products of his own making. The insults he issues have a playground quality. He says to others what was once said to him, believing that they will feel the same hurt as he did - and still does. And somehow this will compensate him. The abused has been sold on the benefit of becoming the abuser.

dAVID MAYBE YOU HAVE DEVELOPED ALTHIEMERS (SIC) BECAUSE YOU POSTED THIS. And you didnt credit it to another writer at the time of posting. Isn't there a word for that lets see....plagerisim.....is that the word? You seem to engage in that quite a bit as you have Dah's poem posted on your myspace page. With out giving credit to Dah. Or maybe you and he are one in the same as you have proven in the past to use more than one screen name.....maybe you staged all this drama for the attention you so seek with no shame at all. Things that make you go....hmmmmmmm.

I don't owe you any type of explanation but in an attempt to keep people from thing me a crack addicted hooker let me set you straight on a few things. I run one of the largest escort services in las vegas, i have at no time been an escort. so when i refer to being in the sex industry that is what i am refering to. i work several different shifts and have computer access at work so yes i can go online when ever i want. i also have an iphone as well as an ipad that enables me to go online when ever i want, from where ever i want. i have never been on crack. i am an addict and always will be. i used meth for many years until 2002 when i was shot 9 times and left for dead. that type of incident in ones life tends to wake one up so to speak. so my reference to drug use is refering to the years before 2002. your feeble attemtps to slander me are laughable. and yes i will be here to call you out on your bad behavior for the life time of this site. helping other poets......i don't call the manipulation of teens and young adults into doing your dirty work helping anyone. i don't think preaching rules of poetic form is positive reinforcment for any writers. The classic rules are what has made poetry boring and sleeping aids for generations of people. i think its bullshit that there be rules to any artistic expressions. thats my oppinion. you have yours and i have mine so be it, we both have a right to them. i can agree to disagree and ignore you. i will not however ignore the video you posted on youtube your inverted love song.....dribble. or the perverted poem you have posted on here about your new girlfriend. i will not ignore the slanderous way you have attacked me in print and on video.......delete them and i will leave you alone and never address you again. its the right thing for you to do and you know it.

02-26-2011 at 01:46:35 PM

RE: To The Original Poetry Site

Clearly, I do not fit this scenario since I am NOT anonymous, therefore, how could I be an "internet sniper"?

David...not anonymous....really...you were posting under feldmarshal trying to pretend you were not studly111, then you posted un cruella or whatever the fuck that stupid name was.....you may be helios......the jury is still out on that one and god knows what other screen names you have used so yes be definition you are an internet sniper. you should have given the writer of that post credit because by all accounts it looks like you wrote it. then when called out on it you then credit it to someone else like its common knowledge. you sadi yourself you are having fun behind the screen.....well thats great for you David....i'm sure you are very proud of the drama you have caused.......you put my name in your drama....when attacking dah here in the forums under the feldmarshall name and became livid when i saw it was you studly111 doing your thing and called you out on it...with the now famous" did you miss me" for all i know you and dah are the same person and you were baiting me and i was dumb enough to fall for it......why you would do this......i don't know....maybe it was because my poem had just won and that made you lose your damn mind sending you into a envy induced tailspin.......or was in a coincidence that i won right before that? you are a master manipulator i will give you that.......and it makes you angry that i see you for what you are.......i dont care if you speak swaheelie and yes i know i spelled it wrong...i never claimed to be educated like you have.......news flash....i hold no degrees....i do not own my own home and i only speak english.......being educated and having a high iq does not make you a good person or mean that you have talent.....you used to write nice poetry but everything you post that is positive or good was written more than a decade ago.......writers block? or maybe you are so obsessed with others you can't seem to write anything new that has any merit. makes me wonder. and here is a thought for you....john wayne gacey he was a home owner too......ted bundy had a high iq.......that does not mean the were not crazy.


and david you don't know me or my family and to take a cheap shot refering to people you know nothing about clearly shows the type of person you are. you don't see me taking cheap shots at your retarded son.....did you like that? did that feel good to you david...keep my name out of your mouth.......do not refer to me in any of your posts delete the perverted video and poem you wrote about me and i will leave you alone....untill then fuck you....i will get all the way under your ski and then i will fester there till you rot from the inside out.

Last edited by JadedJezzabel 02-26-2011 at 01:53:08 PM

02-26-2011 at 06:56:53 PM

RE: RE: To The Original Poetry Site

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Originally Posted by JadedJezzabel

Clearly, I do not fit this scenario since I am NOT anonymous, therefore, how could I be an "internet sniper"?

David...not anonymous....really...you were posting under feldmarshal trying to pretend you were not studly111, then you posted un cruella or whatever the fuck that stupid name was.....you may be helios......the jury is still out on that one and god knows what other screen names you have used so yes be definition you are an internet sniper. you should have given the writer of that post credit because by all accounts it looks like you wrote it. then when called out on it you then credit it to someone else like its common knowledge. you sadi yourself you are having fun behind the screen.....well thats great for you David....i'm sure you are very proud of the drama you have caused.......you put my name in your drama....when attacking dah here in the forums under the feldmarshall name and became livid when i saw it was you studly111 doing your thing and called you out on it...with the now famous" did you miss me" for all i know you and dah are the same person and you were baiting me and i was dumb enough to fall for it......why you would do this......i don't know....maybe it was because my poem had just won and that made you lose your damn mind sending you into a envy induced tailspin.......or was in a coincidence that i won right before that? you are a master manipulator i will give you that.......and it makes you angry that i see you for what you are.......i dont care if you speak swaheelie and yes i know i spelled it wrong...i never claimed to be educated like you have.......news flash....i hold no degrees....i do not own my own home and i only speak english.......being educated and having a high iq does not make you a good person or mean that you have talent.....you used to write nice poetry but everything you post that is positive or good was written more than a decade ago.......writers block? or maybe you are so obsessed with others you can't seem to write anything new that has any merit. makes me wonder. and here is a thought for you....john wayne gacey he was a home owner too......ted bundy had a high iq.......that does not mean the were not crazy.


and david you don't know me or my family and to take a cheap shot refering to people you know nothing about clearly shows the type of person you are. you don't see me taking cheap shots at your retarded son.....did you like that? did that feel good to you david...keep my name out of your mouth.......do not refer to me in any of your posts delete the perverted video and poem you wrote about me and i will leave you alone....untill then fuck you....i will get all the way under your ski and then i will fester there till you rot from the inside out.


YOU JUST DID TAKE A CHEAP SHOT AT MY SON. HE'S NOT RETARDED, HE'S AUTISTIC, BUT YOU'RE TOO STUPID TO KNOW THIS. YOU ADMITTED TO ME IN A POSTING THAT YOU'RE A FUCKING HOOKER, AND SO WHAT DIFFERENCE DOES IT MAKE WHAT YOU SAY SINCE YOU'RE A PATHOLOGICAL LIAR. YOU ARE SICK, VERY VERY SICK, AND I'M GOING TO PROVE IT BY USING YOUR VERY OWN WORDS TO PROVE IT. YOU ARE SO IMPRECISE AND INCOMPETENT AT USING THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE, THAT YOU'RE NOT EVEN INTELIIGENT ENOUGH TO KEEP TRACK OF YOUR OWN FALSEHOODS AND CONTRADICTIONS. THE WAR OF WORDS IS OVER. I AM NOT GOING TO DO BATTLE AGAINST YOU ON THIS LEVEL ANY LONGER, BUT MEANWHILE, I AM GOING TO DO WHAT I DO BEST, AND THAT IS SUBJECT WHAT YOU HAVE ALREADY WRITTEN ABOUT YOURSELF TO CRITICAL, CONTEXTUAL ANALYSIS. I WILL USE THE SKILLS WHICH YOU DENY THAT I HAVE, AND I WILL SHOW YOU TO BE THE LIAR THAT YOU ARE. I HAVE SHOWN YOU TO BE A LIAR OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN. I WENT THROUGH SOME OF YOUR STUFF TODAY AND THERE ARE MANY CONTRADICTIONS AND OBVIOUS ASSERTIONS THAT MAKE NO SENSE AT ALL. IF YOU ARE AN ADDICT, THEN YOU ARE ALSO A HABITUAL AND PATHOLOGICAL LIAR, AND I WILL SHOW THAT IN THE FOLLOWING POSTINGS. FROM NOW ON, YOU WILL BE ARGUING AGAINST YOURSELF.
SHAME ON YOU FOR THAT CHEAP SHOT AGAINST MY SON, YOU FUCKING WHORE!!!

Last edited by feldmarschal 02-26-2011 at 07:01:54 PM

02-26-2011 at 07:07:06 PM

RE: RE: RE: To The Original Poetry Site

Quote:
Originally Posted by JadedJezzabel

Originally Posted by feldmarschal

It is important to boil all of this down to its basic premise: and that is that dahlusion cannot tolerate any criticism that he perceives as "demeaning", no matter how specific or constructive it may be, and that he tries to punish those who "dare" criticize him, like he is doing right now to 16 year old Helios, sending him the most hateful emails viciously attacking me. I have repeatedly offered to meet him on skype, but he has ignored my demands. This extreme reaction to negative criticism is NOT without precedent, as the following piece will show. I know this to be true in my own life, where dissapointing criticsm and rejection caused me to completely stop writing for almost a ten year period, so I know what it feels like. It must be addressed. It must be dealth with.



Criticism is of two kinds: praise and condemnation: approval or reproval. So many people have told me to ignore negative criticism. If only it were that easy. There are very few of us whose lives have not been deeply affected by negative criticism. Thomas Hardy stopped writing novels after Jude the Obscure was badly received by the critics. He had over 30 years' work left in him so the critics deprived the world of many great novels. John Keats was silenced by his critics and died believing himself a failure.

There may be a good reason for the profound effect of criticism. Mankind evolved in relatively small communities. The civilisation of the last 10,000 years has made hardly any difference to our DNA: the motivations which evolved before that still influence our daily lives, even though many of them are no longer relevant. Our deep response to negative criticism is, I suggest, a remnant of these primordial instincts. In primitive times being considered useless might be fatal. "I am a tainted wether of the flock, meetest for death: the weakest kind of fruit drops earliest to the ground." -The Merchant of Venice. Act iv. Sc. 1. Who would want to be chosen for sacrifice or considered to be worth more as a source of protein?

Before there was law, social justice was based on honour. In some lawless communities, such as the inner-city gangs it still is: in such societies it is distinctly unhealthy to be unpopular. Whole societies have been based on manners, etiquette and honour. Alexander Pushkin fought 29 duels and was eventually killed at the age of 39 defending his wife's honour - and, by all accounts, it wasn't worth defending. In such duelling societies the critic had to consider whether his target might be a better swordsman or a better marksman.

Manners or etiquette were codes of social conduct designed to prevent the hurt disapprobation gave to others. In modern society -- particularly in Britain -- this has become inverted: politeness is now considered offensive whereas familiarity and insults between mates are a sign of affection.

This Internet age has given rise to the critical sniper - and snipers have always been the most despised of soldiers. The Internet critic is foulmouthed and illiterate - he hides behind a cloak of anonymity, he offers no products of his own making. The insults he issues have a playground quality. He says to others what was once said to him, believing that they will feel the same hurt as he did - and still does. And somehow this will compensate him. The abused has been sold on the benefit of becoming the abuser.

The only criticism that is valuable to others reflects universal truth, it is not merely an expression of the inner conflict of the critic, and needs must be practised by those most qualified and most altruistic. Negative criticism is often nothing more than boasting in disguise and, like most boasting, is just an outward manifestation of inner feelings of inferiority.



This Internet age has given rise to the critical sniper - and snipers have always been the most despised of soldiers. The Internet critic is foulmouthed and illiterate - he hides behind a cloak of anonymity, he offers no products of his own making. The insults he issues have a playground quality. He says to others what was once said to him, believing that they will feel the same hurt as he did - and still does. And somehow this will compensate him. The abused has been sold on the benefit of becoming the abuser.

dAVID MAYBE YOU HAVE DEVELOPED ALTHIEMERS (SIC) BECAUSE YOU POSTED THIS. And you didnt credit it to another writer at the time of posting. Isn't there a word for that lets see....plagerisim.....is that the word? You seem to engage in that quite a bit as you have Dah's poem posted on your myspace page. With out giving credit to Dah. Or maybe you and he are one in the same as you have proven in the past to use more than one screen name.....maybe you staged all this drama for the attention you so seek with no shame at all. Things that make you go....hmmmmmmm.

I don't owe you any type of explanation but in an attempt to keep people from thing me a crack addicted hooker let me set you straight on a few things. I run one of the largest escort services in las vegas, i have at no time been an escort. so when i refer to being in the sex industry that is what i am refering to. i work several different shifts and have computer access at work so yes i can go online when ever i want. i also have an iphone as well as an ipad that enables me to go online when ever i want, from where ever i want. i have never been on crack. i am an addict and always will be. i used meth for many years until 2002 when i was shot 9 times and left for dead. that type of incident in ones life tends to wake one up so to speak. so my reference to drug use is refering to the years before 2002. your feeble attemtps to slander me are laughable. and yes i will be here to call you out on your bad behavior for the life time of this site. helping other poets......i don't call the manipulation of teens and young adults into doing your dirty work helping anyone. i don't think preaching rules of poetic form is positive reinforcment for any writers. The classic rules are what has made poetry boring and sleeping aids for generations of people. i think its bullshit that there be rules to any artistic expressions. thats my oppinion. you have yours and i have mine so be it, we both have a right to them. i can agree to disagree and ignore you. i will not however ignore the video you posted on youtube your inverted love song.....dribble. or the perverted poem you have posted on here about your new girlfriend. i will not ignore the slanderous way you have attacked me in print and on video.......delete them and i will leave you alone and never address you again. its the right thing for you to do and you know it.

02-26-2011 at 07:15:18 PM

STOP THIS HARASSMENT IMMEDIATELY

TO SUZANNA SMITH:
YOU HAVE JUST ADMITTIED THAT YOU ARE POSTING THESE HARASSING POSTS FOR THE EXPRESS PURPOSE OF CAUSING ME DISTRESS. YOU HAVE JUST ADMITTED THAT. YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO "CALL OUT" ANYBODY FOR BAD BEHAVIOR, OTHER THAN YOUR OWN. I AM HEREBY DEMANDING THAT YOU CEASE AND DESIST THESE POSTINGS IMMEDIATELY, OR SUFFER THE CONSEQUENCES. I HAVE ALREADY TAKEN ACTION, AND OBVIOUSLY HAVE TO CONTINUE MY EFFORTS, WORRY ABOUT YOUR OWN BAD BEHAVIOR, AND LEAVE ME ALONE. ONCE AGAIN, I AM DEMANDING THAT YOU STOP WITH YOUR HARASSMENT OF ME. I AM HERE TO HELP POETS, BUT YOU ARE HERE, JUST TO OBSTRUCT AND TO FRUSTRATE ME. THIS STOPS NOW. I WILL ADDRESS YOU NO FURTHER!

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02-26-2011 at 07:20:37 PM

RE: To The Original Poetry Site

tsk tsk.....see we don't like people taking cheap shots at our families now do we? do onto others......isnt that in the bible? you have already proven to the people on this web site and others that you are a bully, an oportunist, a internet sniper, a shape shifter, a coward, and a word twister.......among other things. so really david bring your proof of whatever you think you have....you've already proven to be some one who can dish it out but you just can't take it......pussy....just admit it. this all boils down to your erectile disfunction......caused by your diabetic issues and that little heart problem you have.......its quite normal for a man your age to have issues in this area....especially one who does not take care of himself, who smokes too much and eats to much and spends too much time on his ass on his computer....i read that autism can be caused by a lack of bonding by the baby with the parents.........due to neglect...is that true? just wondering since i'm obviously ignorant on the subject.wink

02-26-2011 at 07:27:53 PM

RE: STOP THIS HARASSMENT IMMEDIATELY

Quote:
Originally Posted by feldmarschal

TO SUZANNA SMITH:
YOU HAVE JUST ADMITTIED THAT YOU ARE POSTING THESE HARASSING POSTS FOR THE EXPRESS PURPOSE OF CAUSING ME DISTRESS. YOU HAVE JUST ADMITTED THAT. YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO "CALL OUT" ANYBODY FOR BAD BEHAVIOR, OTHER THAN YOUR OWN. I AM HEREBY DEMANDING THAT YOU CEASE AND DESIST THESE POSTINGS IMMEDIATELY, OR SUFFER THE CONSEQUENCES. I HAVE ALREADY TAKEN ACTION, AND OBVIOUSLY HAVE TO CONTINUE MY EFFORTS, WORRY ABOUT YOUR OWN BAD BEHAVIOR, AND LEAVE ME ALONE. ONCE AGAIN, I AM DEMANDING THAT YOU STOP WITH YOUR HARASSMENT OF ME. I AM HERE TO HELP POETS, BUT YOU ARE HERE, JUST TO OBSTRUCT AND TO FRUSTRATE ME. THIS STOPS NOW. I WILL ADDRESS YOU NO FURTHER!

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remove the perverted postings refering to me here and on youtube and i will leave you alone. tit for tat.....besides who are you going to call ghost busters.....

02-27-2011 at 09:50:50 PM

RE: RE: STOP THIS HARASSMENT IMMEDIATELY

Quote:
Originally Posted by JadedJezzabel

Originally Posted by feldmarschal

TO SUZANNA SMITH:
YOU HAVE JUST ADMITTIED THAT YOU ARE POSTING THESE HARASSING POSTS FOR THE EXPRESS PURPOSE OF CAUSING ME DISTRESS. YOU HAVE JUST ADMITTED THAT. YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO "CALL OUT" ANYBODY FOR BAD BEHAVIOR, OTHER THAN YOUR OWN. I AM HEREBY DEMANDING THAT YOU CEASE AND DESIST THESE POSTINGS IMMEDIATELY, OR SUFFER THE CONSEQUENCES. I HAVE ALREADY TAKEN ACTION, AND OBVIOUSLY HAVE TO CONTINUE MY EFFORTS, WORRY ABOUT YOUR OWN BAD BEHAVIOR, AND LEAVE ME ALONE. ONCE AGAIN, I AM DEMANDING THAT YOU STOP WITH YOUR HARASSMENT OF ME. I AM HERE TO HELP POETS, BUT YOU ARE HERE, JUST TO OBSTRUCT AND TO FRUSTRATE ME. THIS STOPS NOW. I WILL ADDRESS YOU NO FURTHER!

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remove the perverted postings refering to me here and on youtube and i will leave you alone. tit for tat.....besides who are you going to call ghost busters.....
THERE'S NO "TIT FOR TAT"! YOU'RE IN VIOLATION OF FEDERAL AND STATE STATUTES, AND I'M GOING TO DO WHAT IS NECESSARY. I HAVE NOT BROKEN THE LAW, BUT YOU HAVE, AND YOU HAVE ADMITTED MALICIOUS INTENT, THEREFORE, YOU'RE IN NO POSITION TO BARGAIN. JUST WAIT FOR THE BRACELETS.

02-28-2011 at 04:32:02 AM

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any law i may have broken you have broken as well.......call yo mama call yo daddy call yo greasy greasy grand mammie........maybe they can help you.......my only intent is to help people by calling you out on your bad behavior. there is nothing malicious. do you really think you can scare me into thinking i could go to jail for this petty bullshit you idiot? that is fucking funny....lmao........and if i could do you think it would be the first time i have been to jail? don't you know i have friends who are bail bondsmen and lawyers and an ATF agent as well as vice cops and police officers here in las vegas......so good luck with having me arrested UNstudly.......I think its very funny you think you can run around the internet fucking with whoever you want, posting perverted shit like your inverted love songs and your fart poetry but no one can say boo to you...then its harrassment. YOU TWISTED OLD FUCK! YOU ARE A PUNK ASS BITCH DAVID!

02-28-2011 at 04:32:29 AM

RE: To The Original Poetry Site

any law i may have broken you have broken as well.......call yo mama call yo daddy call yo greasy greasy grand mammie........maybe they can help you.......my only intent is to help people by calling you out on your bad behavior. there is nothing malicious. do you really think you can scare me into thinking i could go to jail for this petty bullshit you idiot? that is fucking funny....lmao........and if i could do you think it would be the first time i have been to jail? don't you know i have friends who are bail bondsmen and lawyers and an ATF agent as well as vice cops and police officers here in las vegas......so good luck with having me arrested UNstudly.......I think its very funny you think you can run around the internet fucking with whoever you want, posting perverted shit like your inverted love songs and your fart poetry but no one can say boo to you...then its harrassment. YOU TWISTED OLD FUCK! YOU ARE A PUNK ASS BITCH DAVID!

02-28-2011 at 04:32:51 AM

RE: To The Original Poetry Site

any law i may have broken you have broken as well.......call yo mama call yo daddy call yo greasy greasy grand mammie........maybe they can help you.......my only intent is to help people by calling you out on your bad behavior. there is nothing malicious. do you really think you can scare me into thinking i could go to jail for this petty bullshit you idiot? that is fucking funny....lmao........and if i could do you think it would be the first time i have been to jail? don't you know i have friends who are bail bondsmen and lawyers and an ATF agent as well as vice cops and police officers here in las vegas......so good luck with having me arrested UNstudly.......I think its very funny you think you can run around the internet fucking with whoever you want, posting perverted shit like your inverted love songs and your fart poetry but no one can say boo to you...then its harrassment. YOU TWISTED OLD FUCK! YOU ARE A PUNK ASS BITCH DAVID!

02-28-2011 at 04:32:56 AM

RE: To The Original Poetry Site

any law i may have broken you have broken as well.......call yo mama call yo daddy call yo greasy greasy grand mammie........maybe they can help you.......my only intent is to help people by calling you out on your bad behavior. there is nothing malicious. do you really think you can scare me into thinking i could go to jail for this petty bullshit you idiot? that is fucking funny....lmao........and if i could do you think it would be the first time i have been to jail? don't you know i have friends who are bail bondsmen and lawyers and an ATF agent as well as vice cops and police officers here in las vegas......so good luck with having me arrested UNstudly.......I think its very funny you think you can run around the internet fucking with whoever you want, posting perverted shit like your inverted love songs and your fart poetry but no one can say boo to you...then its harrassment. YOU TWISTED OLD FUCK! YOU ARE A PUNK ASS BITCH DAVID!

02-28-2011 at 04:32:58 AM

RE: To The Original Poetry Site

any law i may have broken you have broken as well.......call yo mama call yo daddy call yo greasy greasy grand mammie........maybe they can help you.......my only intent is to help people by calling you out on your bad behavior. there is nothing malicious. do you really think you can scare me into thinking i could go to jail for this petty bullshit you idiot? that is fucking funny....lmao........and if i could do you think it would be the first time i have been to jail? don't you know i have friends who are bail bondsmen and lawyers and an ATF agent as well as vice cops and police officers here in las vegas......so good luck with having me arrested UNstudly.......I think its very funny you think you can run around the internet fucking with whoever you want, posting perverted shit like your inverted love songs and your fart poetry but no one can say boo to you...then its harrassment. YOU TWISTED OLD FUCK! YOU ARE A PUNK ASS BITCH DAVID!

02-28-2011 at 04:32:58 AM

RE: To The Original Poetry Site

any law i may have broken you have broken as well.......call yo mama call yo daddy call yo greasy greasy grand mammie........maybe they can help you.......my only intent is to help people by calling you out on your bad behavior. there is nothing malicious. do you really think you can scare me into thinking i could go to jail for this petty bullshit you idiot? that is fucking funny....lmao........and if i could do you think it would be the first time i have been to jail? don't you know i have friends who are bail bondsmen and lawyers and an ATF agent as well as vice cops and police officers here in las vegas......so good luck with having me arrested UNstudly.......I think its very funny you think you can run around the internet fucking with whoever you want, posting perverted shit like your inverted love songs and your fart poetry but no one can say boo to you...then its harrassment. YOU TWISTED OLD FUCK! YOU ARE A PUNK ASS BITCH DAVID!

02-28-2011 at 04:32:59 AM

RE: To The Original Poetry Site

any law i may have broken you have broken as well.......call yo mama call yo daddy call yo greasy greasy grand mammie........maybe they can help you.......my only intent is to help people by calling you out on your bad behavior. there is nothing malicious. do you really think you can scare me into thinking i could go to jail for this petty bullshit you idiot? that is fucking funny....lmao........and if i could do you think it would be the first time i have been to jail? don't you know i have friends who are bail bondsmen and lawyers and an ATF agent as well as vice cops and police officers here in las vegas......so good luck with having me arrested UNstudly.......I think its very funny you think you can run around the internet fucking with whoever you want, posting perverted shit like your inverted love songs and your fart poetry but no one can say boo to you...then its harrassment. YOU TWISTED OLD FUCK! YOU ARE A PUNK ASS BITCH DAVID!

02-28-2011 at 04:33:05 AM

RE: To The Original Poetry Site

any law i may have broken you have broken as well.......call yo mama call yo daddy call yo greasy greasy grand mammie........maybe they can help you.......my only intent is to help people by calling you out on your bad behavior. there is nothing malicious. do you really think you can scare me into thinking i could go to jail for this petty bullshit you idiot? that is fucking funny....lmao........and if i could do you think it would be the first time i have been to jail? don't you know i have friends who are bail bondsmen and lawyers and an ATF agent as well as vice cops and police officers here in las vegas......so good luck with having me arrested UNstudly.......I think its very funny you think you can run around the internet fucking with whoever you want, posting perverted shit like your inverted love songs and your fart poetry but no one can say boo to you...then its harrassment. YOU TWISTED OLD FUCK! YOU ARE A PUNK ASS BITCH DAVID!

02-28-2011 at 04:33:07 AM

RE: To The Original Poetry Site

any law i may have broken you have broken as well.......call yo mama call yo daddy call yo greasy greasy grand mammie........maybe they can help you.......my only intent is to help people by calling you out on your bad behavior. there is nothing malicious. do you really think you can scare me into thinking i could go to jail for this petty bullshit you idiot? that is fucking funny....lmao........and if i could do you think it would be the first time i have been to jail? don't you know i have friends who are bail bondsmen and lawyers and an ATF agent as well as vice cops and police officers here in las vegas......so good luck with having me arrested UNstudly.......I think its very funny you think you can run around the internet fucking with whoever you want, posting perverted shit like your inverted love songs and your fart poetry but no one can say boo to you...then its harrassment. YOU TWISTED OLD FUCK! YOU ARE A PUNK ASS BITCH DAVID!

02-28-2011 at 04:33:22 AM

RE: To The Original Poetry Site

any law i may have broken you have broken as well.......call yo mama call yo daddy call yo greasy greasy grand mammie........maybe they can help you.......my only intent is to help people by calling you out on your bad behavior. there is nothing malicious. do you really think you can scare me into thinking i could go to jail for this petty bullshit you idiot? that is fucking funny....lmao........and if i could do you think it would be the first time i have been to jail? don't you know i have friends who are bail bondsmen and lawyers and an ATF agent as well as vice cops and police officers here in las vegas......so good luck with having me arrested UNstudly.......I think its very funny you think you can run around the internet fucking with whoever you want, posting perverted shit like your inverted love songs and your fart poetry but no one can say boo to you...then its harrassment. YOU TWISTED OLD FUCK! YOU ARE A PUNK ASS BITCH DAVID!

02-28-2011 at 04:38:55 AM

RE: To The Original Poetry Site

there once was an idiot named studly
who appeared to be very fugley
he sat around on his ass
picking boogers with gas
he'll end up like humpty dumpedly

02-28-2011 at 02:32:25 PM

RE: To The Original Poetry Site

This website is a joke, isn't there a mod for this forum to shut the both of you up?

big surprise

03-01-2011 at 08:08:44 AM

RE: RE: To The Original Poetry Site

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Originally Posted by andy2103

This website is a joke, isn't there a mod for this forum to shut the both of you up?

big surprise
There was, but as for now it seems its a free for all, sorry

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)