ghetto love note(lol)

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    ghetto love note(lol)

    It seems that We've come to the end of the road as we get closer to the end of the school year and I'm goin in a whole notha direction. But what the end of this road may hold for me may be way different than what it holds for you. You see, I have no intentions of being stranded and cold with memories and shoulda coulda woulda's.....I have a cell fone(wit a very nice plan and service if i may add) and I will call up the next ride in line love. Trust, it's no hard feelinz I do love u but I refuse to be hurt by or to hurt u so I feel that it's best for us to just stop here and I can find a way home or a way to anotha life like the one i momentarily had with you. No You've never done me wrong and I do trust you, but how can a flower blossom without soil and water and sunlight? I think I may have found anotha nd no, we didnt just meet but for now thats just the way the cookie crumbles. But I will go on and I WILL NOT BE STRANDED and I wuld hope u dont stay stranded eitha(which is hard 2 believe wuld happen.....ur a hunk lol). I wish u the best of luck in your future nd i hope u wish me the same. And I'd still like to be friends. I love you.

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    crystar12 commented on ghetto love note(lol)

    03-29-2009

    lol this is cute...

    fennesse commented on ghetto love note(lol)

    03-20-2009

    keeping it real you with your own form of writing,that's good (how did he take it was he ok?if u don't mind me asking) or he had no choice

    chadallac74 commented on ghetto love note(lol)

    03-04-2009

    That was cool... keep up the good work!!! This is very artistic in the form you chose too.

    mmichelle97219 commented on ghetto love note(lol)

    03-04-2009

    it does not read poetically but more like a monologue. I would work on a more poetic style Michelle

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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