I'm listening to me

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My hatred for someone led me to write this piece...

I'm listening to me

Someone told me there was a God
 Someone told me dreams come true
Someone told me I could go far
Someone told me to believe in you

Someone told me to be strong
Someone told me to hold out
 Someone told me it wont be long
Someone told me to lose my doubt

All the thing's that I've been told
All the things that they've said
I've put them all on hold
I control my own head

There is no GOD
Dreams don't come true
I cannot go far
I WON'T belive in you

I won't be strong
I can't hold out
You took too long
All I have is doubts

I've lost my faith
Lying dorment on the ground
My soul fills with hate
I want to end it all now

I don't care anymore
My respect is gone
My hopes are out the door
My childish dreams have moved on

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

LadyIntellect’s Poems (14)

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I'm listening to me 0
Emotional takeover 0
The Greatest(song inspired by and written for eminem) 0
RANDOM EMOTIONS/SUIC
IDE LETTER
1
Violated 8
UNBREAKABLE 4
Real Friends??? 2
Judgmental 6
Dedication to my godmother 5
Letter to bush/Pointles
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16
ghetto love note(lol) 4
Challenge your strength 4
Never Ending 6
Will the world ever change? 8