God Please Listen

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    God Please Listen

    God must hate me or just doesn't care.
    I hurt so much that it isn't fare.
    God please make the pain go away,
    before I breakdown and my life begin to frey.

    I guess it's your plan or my fate.
    I play with peoples minds out of my hate.
    I can't change the past I must be being shund.
    It was wrong the things that I have done.

    I speak to no one because I lie,
    to hide my past instead of cry.
    God do you hear me or am I speaking to the wind.
    I just want to know because my faith is running very thin.

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    origionalmerlin commented on God Please Listen

    04-06-2009

    up ratings because your feelings come through your words.. self honesty is a key element, good write

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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