Her Dream Man

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    Poem Commentary

    This was written as what would appeal to a women in a man. (from a woman's point of view)

    Her Dream Man

    She knows where she stands

    She just doesn’t hear the I love yous

    She feels them

    He is a mature man as she is a mature woman

    He’s not afraid to proclaim to the world that she’s his Love

    His girl

    He’s self-motivated  and always improving

    Because he knows who he is

    He’ll already be working on his flaws

    Before she notices them

    There is no power struggle between the two

    No fishing for compliments or security because they have good communication

    His life does not revolve around drinking, he has real interest in life

    He NEVER disappears from her, he’s always there for her

    When times get tough and stress builds up

    He doesn’t take it out on her, he simply lets her know he needs to clear his head

    He’s a strong enough man to be upfront and honest with her rather than running away

    He’s not manipulative

    He’s secure

    When he doesn’t agree with her he tells her

    He encourages her

    He wants to be the best for her

    There are no guessing games between the two, he’s direct with her

    She knows where he stands

    And the two have a conversation about it, they communicate

    For he is her dream, her man

    -Fin-

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    poett commented on Her Dream Man

    03-30-2014

    this one made me smile. it was like reading a description of my husband. nice write i feel lucky tonight as i see ...

    TheLastCowboy

    03/30/2014

    thank you

    Trista3 commented on Her Dream Man

    03-29-2014

    That was beautiful. Every good woman deserves a man like that and every good man deserves a woman with the same qualities. good write.

    TheLastCowboy

    03/29/2014

    thank you, I wish I could find a woman of such value!

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.
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