Hide 'n Seek

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  • Confusion

    Hide 'n Seek

    I have played hide and seek for so long
    I can't find home base
    and become confused
    as to where to hide
    and what to seek
    So sit contently out of sight
    and hiding becomes my home base

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    Tempestlady commented on Hide 'n Seek

    07-08-2009

    I was thinking "a way of flight" at the end. I can really relate. I love the simple clear content. So many writers are so vague with their subject. Write on.....

    Jonietta

    07/17/2009

    Thanks for your insight to my writing...not use to having it out there. Am trying to adjust to the idea of others reading my soul

    causeofbalance commented on Hide 'n Seek

    03-09-2009

    you will find your home base, everyone has one. perhaps stick your neck out a little, go out on a limb and you will prob find something you love. saw you said you feel invisible on alejapoets comment, I feel the same way from this site, because hardly anyone responds to my comments or poems. dunno if thats why you feel invisible, but i related to it and decided to give you some feedback. good poem

    shydog commented on Hide 'n Seek

    03-07-2009

    you just think your invisible, but that works, some one has to want to see you, you, it realy doesnt take much as they think, a simple, hello, will do . . . .so, hello.

    alejapoet commented on Hide 'n Seek

    03-05-2009

    As a cancer sign I can relate to home base because i love to hide in my shell when i am hurting and sometimes home base can be so safe my friend.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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