House Of Pain
Two peopleliving in a house of pain, the love that once brought them together causing them to share the same last name is now in doubt and nether says a thing. Thoughts never expressed encouraging words never spoken and both wandering if now is the time for their vows to be broken. Living in a house of pain because the life they envisioned never came, could it all be lost, will it stay the same or will Love again be regained. Two people living in a house of pain both wanting to be Loved, but thinking will I loose or gain. Oh what a shame because truly Love don't cost a thing. Marriage is not a game it's hard work you see and Communication is the key for with Jesus then with Me. With Jesus as the head of this husband and wife team we can move and do anything , you see this relationship is in need of an address change so pack up and lets move out of this house of pain together in Jesus NameHouse Of Pain
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danmartyjake1 commented on House Of Pain
09-03-2009
- I like this one. Great use of words and rhyming, too....
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cmlestrade commented on House Of Pain
07-29-2009
- You said it. Jesus can do anything. As long as you do your part God will fix the rest. Your poetry is very realistic and very emotional. Please keep sharing your gift with us.
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08/04/2009
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Clementinewoods commented on House Of Pain
07-29-2009
- Go to God in prayer and pray for guidance in your marriage. Allow Him the opportunity to mend your marriage because with God, all things are possible. Also keep in mind the things that brought you all together; the things that brought you all closer together; and mainly, the things that caused you all to decide to be joined together; then maybe by the grace of God, those very things may be the things that can keep you all together. You are a great writer. You expressed your feelings in this poem very well but I do pray that you all are able to work things out. Be forever blessed, Clementine!!!
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08/04/2009
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