I ask you now

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I ask you now

You came to me again
with a question in your heart
telling me what's wrong
in your life at that point in time

You shared with me
a secret deep
and opened yourself
to love's disappointment and pain

Your question still
after all I say and do
'will I let you go
again as I did last
when we were thru'

I ask you now
as I last did not
to be mine forever
and thicken the plot

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Saylar commented on I ask you now

11-10-2009

The last verse of this piece gave me the chills! A rekindled love, a second chance that many never get, powerful stuff indeed Marius! Best wishes on the contest! You have my vote on this one. Saylar

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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