I Came To Say Goodbye (So long and thanks for all the lies)

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    I Came To Say Goodbye (So long and thanks for all the lies)
    I came upon your waking breaths
    just to say goodbye
    To cast your lies out into a void
    To wave a white flag of sympathetic similes
    I came in with the wind
    A miniscule spec of what a pity
    To ride bareback upon your untamed ego
    Over undulating memories, of what never was
    I came in with the cold

    (Missing you more, with each warm greeting offered)

    I came to say goodbye

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    mal commented on I Came To Say Goodbye (So long and thanks for all the lies)

    12-29-2013

    A sadly beautiful piece "T". They grab you right in the memories.. mal
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    moonsail

    12/29/2013

    Hehe...thanks mal..:)

    spideracer commented on I Came To Say Goodbye (So long and thanks for all the lies)

    12-28-2013

    I just entered a gold winner from that other site so check it out when you can. Your one here is another fine example of your poetic talents and there's a deep sadness lingering within your beautifully expressed and powerful lines. Thanks for sharing T.
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    moonsail

    12/28/2013

    Thanks spidie...btw..your post here is outstanding

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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