I can't give you up

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  • Friendship

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    For a friend that so confusing

    I can't give you up

        My friend...
       It is so obvious that you does not care
       And it would be fair
       That I should leave you alone 
       Why the thought of you keep on
       Driving me crazy and day is so long
       Why are you being this way?
       Or just me get in your way
       I am crazy for you
       And I can not help it, too
       I can't give you up 
       And I don't know whats up
       I want to scream so loud 
       That you would hear me and what is all about
       My friend, 
       I thought we would be friend to the end
       Far away that you go
       Far away in distance and soul
       Friend, my friend, I need you so
       
       
       
       
        
       
      

      


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    miry commented on I can't give you up

    09-02-2009

    Sweet and sad....I so sympathize with you..it seems that our poems have something in common...
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    Easyspirit

    09/04/2009

    Thank you so much for your comment. Yes I think our poems have something in common. I felt that too when I read your poem

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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