I Can't Take It

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  • Passion
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  • Confusion
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  • Devotion

    Poem Commentary

    This is just about me being insecure because my husband and I argue a lot. I'm afraid that I'm going to push him away. So, I've gotten myself flustered enough to start imaging these things.

    I Can't Take It

     I can't take imagining you doing those things; it hurts so much.
    To imagine your lips on another, them caressing you with their touch.
    I delve into complete depression, I bury my sorrow in a drink.
    And, that my love is when I start to think.
    I draw up these two naked bodies touching. Kissing. Everything.
    Doing everything that makes the body sing.
    Please don't go too far from me.
    I don't want to see.
    Be mine and only mine, please.

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    poetrygirl94 commented on I Can't Take It

    12-21-2009

    This is really heartfelt. I really love this and the structure of the poem. -Rachel
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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