I Can't Take No More

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    • is exhausted jus stoppin thru more poems coming soon and I will get in touch with each of you who took the time out to respond to my poems. Thanks so much.

    I Can't Take No More

    cant take no more


    The more I think about it
    The more I get mad as hell
    You tell everything you know
    but some secrets you cant seem to tell
    I am all cried out trying to love you
    somewhere I must've failed
    failed to see what you are truly capable of
    cause you hide underneath the sweetest shell

    It seems like we are at the end of our road
    I am not afraid to reveal
    I have to say something right here and now
    before they will be saying she was killed
    by the one she loved so deep and so true
    but only gave her days and nights full of tears
    gave up her life and all of the above
    to be with her long lost boo

    This is quite a lesson I have learned
    to add to the ones under my belt
    I cant understand why keep going
    but once I am gone I wont be coming back
    you can have who you want and do what you do
    but I will be laughing at
    the fact that you go another to use
    mistreat and abuse
    while she bragging and boasting
    soon will be singing the blues
    crying bout how she is hurt
    digging up all your dirt
    eventually changing her whole mode
    and screaming I can' t take no more

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    kdavidscott1 commented on I Can't Take No More

    06-05-2009

    Yell this is good - someone thinking they got your man and brought tears to your eyes - but in the long run to their surprize - a little to late for them to recognize - no they're the one trying to analyze - the things you've been through they now realize... KD

    spirit

    06/07/2009

    Thanks for the comment and taking the time out to read my drama filled poem.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

    spirit’s Poems (11)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Plead my case 3
    I love the man that I hate 2
    I Can't Take No More 1
    Dirty 4
    Cheaters 3
    Writing is my Therapy 2
    How could you? 3
    These Kind of Negative Things 5
    Sick to Death 0
    In the midst of the rain 2
    Touching Her 6