I Love U

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    I Love U
    Loving you is so beautiful
    Makes me forget all pain
    My life becomes colorful
    I could see rainbow in the rain

    Loving you is so beautiful
    That multiplies my happiness
    I say, world is so wonderful
    Learning, lessons of forgiveness

    Loving you is so beautiful
    Gives me the direction
    Making my each step meaningful
    A passion to reach the destination

    Loving you is so beautiful
    I cannot be, just ‘Me’
    All say me, ‘fool’
    But I realized the importance of ‘We’

    Loving you is so beautiful
    That’s make me perfect
    Your love keeps me cheerful
    Without you I am imperfect

    Loving you is so beautiful
    I have no more words to express
    Just, I LOVE YOU

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    origionalmerlin commented on I Love U

    03-24-2009

    ahhh nice choice of words
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    Robin commented on I Love U

    03-04-2009

    She must know how much you love her...Words can not express the meaning of love as well as we try to, it comes from the Heart and i think you succeeded somewhat... this is very good, keep writing...
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    mykhail commented on I Love U

    03-02-2009

    Very beautiful and great expression, loved how you used imagery to describe the ego and how you realize the importance of "we"!
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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