I love you but F U!

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    I love you but F U!

    You cheated on me
    You lied to me
    You took my heart and smashed it with ease
    I stand here quivereing as blood pours out of the open cavaties
    A crimson red puddle forming at my feet
    Im barely standing
    My once rosey complextion draining into a pale white
    My eyes loosing their sight
    Please leave my heart alone
    Dont try to pick up the pieces to fix what you have torn down
    You created this mess, this havoc, this massacre
    Though harsh and hard to believe its true
    So put the pieces down and let this part of me die
    So that I can finally be through with you and sleep peacefully tonight.

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    magicmanzz commented on I love you but F U!

    08-18-2009

    i like this one and no poetry is not all u r ur a woman human heart and soul and the existance of ur self

    rollerderby commented on I love you but F U!

    07-28-2009

    I don't know how long ago you wrote this, but I hope things are getting better. I'v ebeen divorced 3 times because of cheating wives. So I can relate, only from the opposite side of the gender fence. I found someone else and you will too. So, chin up and move on with your life, he's not worth wasting your time over. Well written dear.

    Romano commented on I love you but F U!

    06-25-2009

    i love this, this is for every one who has been lied to and cheated on and in a relationship with someone that just walked out and seem as if what you had didnt mean anything to them at all as you try to figure out what went wrong or what you did for them to do what they did, then you realize its not you its them

    brandon commented on I love you but F U!

    03-22-2009

    had something like this happen a few years ago nice work keep it up

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