I Sense You

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    This poem was written for my soul mate. I feel his reality in all that I do.He inspires me to open up and be who I am without fear.God bless him.

    I Sense You

                                     I Sense You                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     It is understood by individuals with heightened senses that the key to a great romance is recognition and sensing of your loved one in the smallest of details. In this manner, you never let your love slip away from you.                                                                                         I sense our love no matter where we are. Whenever I am outdoors, I can just look around and see your generous creativity in our gardens. I feel blessed as God pours forth his sunshine on it and softly blows a warm breeze through my hair. I am certain that the combination of his work and yours will create a wondrous awe-inspiring view of beauty to remind me that I am loved.                                                                      I sense you and I having a meaningful life because you believe life must include a concern for things beyond yourself. Your compassion and understanding are intense and have helped me to believe in the sweet melody of a tradition of a balanced and true companionship.                                                                                                                I sense your love with a simple glance from you. Your enchanting eyes are the window to your soul. I feel unification within their depths and consequently understand a destiny revealed in them.                                                                                                       I sense your love for me as I recall your singing for me as it dispelled the loneliness that I once thought would be infinite if not for you. I’ve listened and the joy and spontaneity vanquished that isolation through the simple personification of a woman’s dreams consisting of serenades of promises and heartfelt wishes.                                                                                                                                       I sense the depth of your tenderness as you reach out for me in your sleep when all your defenses are down and draw me in with out hesitation. I am instinctively wrapped in the safe haven of your arms and our dreams are as one. You are my comfort.                          I sense our closeness and love between us even when we aren’t in proximity to each other physically. I can send you the thoughts and enduring strength of my heightened heartfelt emotions through empty time and space. Knowing that you will characteristically carry it with you everywhere without boundaries.                                               I sense these things are but a few of the mystical and extraordinary fibers of our life that will be woven into our hearts and that I foresee the undeniable simplicity in contemplating a full life with you.                                                                                                      I sense as God’s creation with this elevated sense of awareness, I will sail paradise with you in unabashed and exceptional love from the heart eternally.

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    ccslim commented on I Sense You

    06-23-2009

    Wow! Just flipp'n WOW! Great write backed with very wise words of encouragement and direction! wOOt!

    StandingBear commented on I Sense You

    06-22-2009

    Another great write. "I sense your love with a simple glance from you". Great lines. *---------* 9

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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