I talk to my God all of the time?

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What does your voice say????

I talk to my God all of the time?

I talk to my god all of the time?
Does he really want to listen to me whine?
Who is this God whose opinion is golden?
where is he at when our lives are folding?

God is a word that puts me at risk
If I put it in his hands what will I miss
The purest of sin
has been followed by men
who name God as the reason
that thier sin is not sin

Is this the same figuer who ignores my voice?
Why does he not answer those who live by his choice?

If things are all good, he pointed the way
while if things do crumble he has nothing to say

when I say he 
am I speaking of me?

Is he the voice in my head that points me straight?
A conscience it's called, or mabye it's fait.
Does this need to be an unstopable force?
or mabye his power can be harnessed in a choice.

As he points me toward good?
and his opposite shows me I could?

I'll just stay in myself
and react to these things, while pushing towards wealth
Avoiding the voice that doesn't mind crime
I talk to my God all of the time. 

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Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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