i thought you were my friend

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  • Anger

    i thought you were my friend
    but it turns out your were a lier.
    you've deceived me, and hurt me, and yet you don't know how to apologize for it, i loved you for two whole years, and gave up to much for you, it was a waste, and seeing you today made me realize you are nothing, you call yourself a solder, yet you waste your breathe and scream at me, when people out there don't even get to take another breathe, your worthless, i don't need you, i can make it on my own , none really gets to be happy do they?

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    honesty34 commented on i thought you were my friend

    07-28-2009

    I felt the meanin in your words and i think your a great writer..keep up the great work
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    beautifuldeath commented on i thought you were my friend

    01-15-2009

    I agree with Spacer. this has the potential to flow quite well. reading it aloud also helps quite a bit. I commend you for portraying your hurt and anger so vividly.
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    brokengirl727 commented on i thought you were my friend

    01-11-2009

    I can really relate to this and i can almost feel your anger. Great job
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    Spacer commented on i thought you were my friend

    01-11-2009

    I Recommend gathering all these thoughts of anger and making it into something with more Flow...to get a better rating. But i liked that you didn't hold back very nice
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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