so sublime

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so sublime

my skin
so fair like the soft white sand out by the ocean
my body
moves like the breeze swirling around the sea side
my voice
speaks softly like the waves swim on the massive waters floor
my eyes
they shine as bright as our sun, and gives such radiant glares
my touch
like an angel, from the heavens that hear our praise
i dream the day i become of what i speak
and maybe ill have such beauty


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lonewolf commented on so sublime

03-09-2009

nice poem. physical beautiful is awesome, inner beauty is powerful.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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