suffercation of mind

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suffercation of mind

how i come to see you at the end of the dark light
your never really there for me you know
you temper down my hollow walls
and tell me things that dont make sense
i dont love you, who are you
i have so many questions to ask you
but your not to answer my seemingly adamant self
i care for me you must be known to my selfishness
i had this sort of gloomy gaze upon your sweet face
but what light sweeps it into a beautiful picture
it makes me obsess towards you
now i cant seem to get your mysteriousness out of my mind
your my drug now see
and i need you like we need air
i thrive for you, but for what?
im clueless that my heart tilts toward something so pathetic
and doesn't mean anything to me
what is this feeling you give me
its your bitter sweet sorrow im taking in
i need the light and the end
but you
your in my way now
theres no way out

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GCoudret commented on suffercation of mind

05-25-2009

I understand what was said here; we have all been there at that very ripe age of first loves. Believe me when I say that it will get better in time and with age. Even at my age, Love STILL sucks!!!!!!! Lol

thomasX90 commented on suffercation of mind

02-05-2009

Very well done. I can relate to this in some ways with what i've been through in past relationships.

xxlheart commented on suffercation of mind

01-30-2009

i love the feel of this piece. like a picture that is out of focus to everybody except the one that took the picture. excellent write!!

bforibus commented on suffercation of mind

01-21-2009

i loved the dark colors of this poem made me feel like the main character lost their memory

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

mightymegan18’s Poems (16)

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short 0
short 0
you come back again 0
cut her open 0
help paint these walls 1
join me 2
suffercation of mind 4
never knowing 3
just a single red rose 4
so sublime 3
so cold 6
ill see through those eyes 3
soft wisper 1
really short just a thought 2
i thought you were my friend 5
Tear down the walls 3