I Told Her I Love Her...

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    I Told Her I Love Her...

    I told her I love her...
    and for a quicc second i thought to myself, wut have i done...
    that second felt like hours as she gazed into my eyes not sayin a word..
    i felt my heart drop into my stomach and i wondered, why would she even wanna say it bacc? I mean it's not like I give her any reason to love me...it's not like i call her everyday, or see her everyday...matter fact all i ever really do is picc fights with her...
    but man if you could see her when she's mad...how her eyes begin to glow and twitch, the way her hair flows when she hits me wit da ghetto neck thing and the finger point...but why would i anger her if i love her?

    I told her I love her...
    and for a quicc second, I could've sworn i heard her laugh...why wouldn't she laugh? love is a joke, it's a game played by people with nothing better to do with their time, but to fucc with someone's emotions, act like they care for days months sometimes even years...some even play da game so good, they let it give em grey hairs, but yet they're still there, pretending to care...
    all until that one day comes when they either decide to go play that game with someone else, or just get tired of playing period and retire leaving behind four kids, two dogs, and a shit load of unpaid bills...but why would you quit if it's love?

    I told her I love her...
    And for a quicc second i could've sworn i was lying, i could sworn it was silent, i could've sworn she was laughin...i could've sworn...i could've sworn...i could've sworn it was all just make believe...
    but i knew...i knew it was real...i knew because when i woke up she was the first thing on my mind...i knew because when i turned around she was right behind, i knew because of that look she had in her eye, i knew because even when i'd piss her off on purpose, she would start to get mad, but then hit me with the nevermind...

    I told her I love her...
    and for a second i thought it was said too soon...but then i stopped thinking and actually listened...and i realized one second between two will always seem long, because it takes two seconds to say what she said...and that was that she loves me too.


    ~Rico Swaggz~

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    danmartyjake1 commented on I Told Her I Love Her...

    12-09-2009

    This was a fantastic write and it brings so many feelings to the surface. I enjoyed reading it and I will check out more of yours as soon as i get back on OP.

    RicoSwaggz

    12/10/2009

    i appreciate it

    Rhymer commented on I Told Her I Love Her...

    12-09-2009

    Very nice heart felt write. Enjoyed your imagination and creativity with this piece, 10 from me

    RicoSwaggz

    12/10/2009

    i appreciate it

    jesusfreake commented on I Told Her I Love Her...

    12-08-2009

    awww...thats so sweet...u put a lot into this and it shows...u have a real talent with connecting with the reader...for a second i could have sworn u were talking about my bf when he said i love u....lol, i love that line by the way, "i could've sworn" this is awesome and going in my faves!!

    RicoSwaggz

    12/10/2009

    i appreciate it

    rosiedee commented on I Told Her I Love Her...

    09-11-2009

    I really like this piece... in fact, I like everything you've written... you really flow!

    RicoSwaggz

    12/08/2009

    thank you i appreciate it

    SavVySam commented on I Told Her I Love Her...

    08-01-2009

    Very honest and poignant, and like your style reveals a capacity for great depth! Effective letter use with the cc- Good Job

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