I Will Try To Fix You

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    This is written by my daughter at age 17.  She wrote this about dealing with me.

    I Will Try To Fix You

    I'm confused,
    I don't know what to do
    the choice is left up to you

    I'm tired of crying
    and thinking about dying

    I fight for what I feel
    but does that make it real?
    It's kinda surreal

    This feeling that I feel
    I want the world to know me
    but not be in control of me
    Sometimes I feel like I'm spinning out of control
    I'm wating for the world to stop before me

    No friends, no life
    What's the point in the fight
    ha, it's the only fucking way to live this life

    fight or flight
    that's the ultimatum
    That's what it comes to
    disrespect left and right
    What's the point of this life

    show me the good side
    I don't want to be on the hood side
    It's not for me
    this isn't who I want to be

    I don't want to rely on drugs
    or a bunch of hugs
    I'll make it through
    on my own way
    like i always do

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    Alexia commented on I Will Try To Fix You

    06-23-2009

    Very well written. The heartbreak just comes across. Youre dtr is a very strong young lady! She reminds me of myself at 17

    melissapaige

    06/24/2009

    Thank you for your comment. Yes, she is a very strong girl! She is my EVERYTHING!

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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